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<mxCell id="LhqL1n53AIMKY4t22Z_X-4" value="<p class="MsoNormal" style="forced-color-adjust: none; color: rgb(0, 0, 0); font-family: Helvetica; font-size: 12px; font-style: normal; font-variant-ligatures: normal; font-variant-caps: normal; font-weight: 400; letter-spacing: normal; orphans: 2; text-align: left; text-indent: 0px; text-transform: none; widows: 2; word-spacing: 0px; -webkit-text-stroke-width: 0px; white-space: normal; background-color: rgb(255, 255, 255); text-decoration-thickness: initial; text-decoration-style: initial; text-decoration-color: initial; margin-bottom: 0.0001pt; line-height: 20pt;"><span style="forced-color-adjust: none; font-size: 12pt; font-family: 宋体;">对专家<span lang="EN-US" style="forced-color-adjust: none;">2</span>的审稿意见，回复如下：<span lang="EN-US" style="forced-color-adjust: none;"></span></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="forced-color-adjust: none; color: rgb(0, 0, 0); font-family: Helvetica; font-size: 12px; font-style: normal; font-variant-ligatures: normal; font-variant-caps: normal; font-weight: 400; letter-spacing: normal; orphans: 2; text-align: left; text-indent: 0px; text-transform: none; widows: 2; word-spacing: 0px; -webkit-text-stroke-width: 0px; white-space: normal; background-color: rgb(255, 255, 255); text-decoration-thickness: initial; text-decoration-style: initial; text-decoration-color: initial; margin-bottom: 0.0001pt; line-height: 20pt;"><span style="forced-color-adjust: none; font-size: 12pt; font-family: 宋体;">意见<span lang="EN-US" style="forced-color-adjust: none;">1</span>：表<span lang="EN-US" style="forced-color-adjust: none;">1</span>中▲为优化目标，△为约束条件但是，在表<span lang="EN-US" style="forced-color-adjust: none;">1</span>中并没有看到△，所以所列信息全是优化目标吗？<span lang="EN-US" style="forced-color-adjust: none;"></span></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="forced-color-adjust: none; color: rgb(0, 0, 0); font-family: Helvetica; font-size: 12px; font-style: normal; font-variant-ligatures: normal; font-variant-caps: normal; font-weight: 400; letter-spacing: normal; orphans: 2; text-align: left; text-indent: 0px; text-transform: none; widows: 2; word-spacing: 0px; -webkit-text-stroke-width: 0px; white-space: normal; background-color: rgb(255, 255, 255); text-decoration-thickness: initial; text-decoration-style: initial; text-decoration-color: initial; margin-bottom: 0.0001pt; line-height: 20pt;"><span style="forced-color-adjust: none; font-size: 12pt; font-family: 宋体; color: blue;">回复：我们在表<span lang="EN-US" style="forced-color-adjust: none;">1</span>中遗漏了约束条件的标记，十分抱歉出现此类不严谨的问题。感谢您指出了问题，我们认真检查并校正了稿件中所有的图表。<br style="forced-color-adjust: none;"><span lang="EN-US" style="forced-color-adjust: none;"></span></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="forced-color-adjust: none; color: rgb(0, 0, 0); font-family: Helvetica; font-size: 12px; font-style: normal; font-variant-ligatures: normal; font-variant-caps: normal; font-weight: 400; letter-spacing: normal; orphans: 2; text-align: left; text-indent: 0px; text-transform: none; widows: 2; word-spacing: 0px; -webkit-text-stroke-width: 0px; white-space: normal; background-color: rgb(255, 255, 255); text-decoration-thickness: initial; text-decoration-style: initial; text-decoration-color: initial; margin-bottom: 0.0001pt; line-height: 20pt;"><span lang="EN-US" style="forced-color-adjust: none; font-size: 12pt; font-family: 宋体;">&nbsp;</span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="forced-color-adjust: none; color: rgb(0, 0, 0); font-family: Helvetica; font-size: 12px; font-style: normal; font-variant-ligatures: normal; font-variant-caps: normal; font-weight: 400; letter-spacing: normal; orphans: 2; text-align: left; text-indent: 0px; text-transform: none; widows: 2; word-spacing: 0px; -webkit-text-stroke-width: 0px; white-space: normal; background-color: rgb(255, 255, 255); text-decoration-thickness: initial; text-decoration-style: initial; text-decoration-color: initial; margin-bottom: 0.0001pt; line-height: 20pt;"><span lang="EN-US" style="forced-color-adjust: none; font-size: 12pt; font-family: 宋体;">&nbsp;</span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="forced-color-adjust: none; color: rgb(0, 0, 0); font-family: Helvetica; font-size: 12px; font-style: normal; font-variant-ligatures: normal; font-variant-caps: normal; font-weight: 400; letter-spacing: normal; orphans: 2; text-align: left; text-indent: 0px; text-transform: none; widows: 2; word-spacing: 0px; -webkit-text-stroke-width: 0px; white-space: normal; background-color: rgb(255, 255, 255); text-decoration-thickness: initial; text-decoration-style: initial; text-decoration-color: initial; margin-bottom: 0.0001pt; line-height: 20pt;"><span style="forced-color-adjust: none; font-size: 12pt; font-family: 宋体;">意见<span lang="EN-US" style="forced-color-adjust: none;">2</span>：<span lang="EN-US" style="forced-color-adjust: none;">1.3.1</span>中低温下，锂离子电池的快充能力为什么会下降，作者有必要做一些论述。<span lang="EN-US" style="forced-color-adjust: none;"></span></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="forced-color-adjust: none; color: rgb(0, 0, 0); font-family: Helvetica; font-size: 12px; font-style: normal; font-variant-ligatures: normal; font-variant-caps: normal; font-weight: 400; letter-spacing: normal; orphans: 2; text-align: left; text-indent: 0px; text-transform: none; widows: 2; word-spacing: 0px; -webkit-text-stroke-width: 0px; white-space: normal; background-color: rgb(255, 255, 255); text-decoration-thickness: initial; text-decoration-style: initial; text-decoration-color: initial; margin-bottom: 0.0001pt; line-height: 20pt;"><span style="forced-color-adjust: none; font-size: 12pt; font-family: 宋体; color: blue;">回复：感谢您提出的宝贵意见，为了说明低温下锂离子电池性能发生变化的原因，我们补充了相关的解释，并添加了相关的参考文献，具体如下。</span><span lang="EN-US" style="forced-color-adjust: none; font-size: 12pt; font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;, serif; color: blue;"></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="forced-color-adjust: none; color: rgb(0, 0, 0); font-family: Helvetica; font-size: 12px; font-style: normal; font-variant-ligatures: normal; font-variant-caps: normal; font-weight: 400; letter-spacing: normal; orphans: 2; text-align: left; text-indent: 0px; text-transform: none; widows: 2; word-spacing: 0px; -webkit-text-stroke-width: 0px; white-space: normal; background-color: rgb(255, 255, 255); text-decoration-thickness: initial; text-decoration-style: initial; text-decoration-color: initial; margin-bottom: 0.0001pt; line-height: 20pt;"><b style="forced-color-adjust: none;"><span style="forced-color-adjust: none; font-size: 10pt; font-family: 宋体;">一些研究表明在低温环境下，锂离子电池的电解液和</span></b><b style="forced-color-adjust: none;"><span lang="EN-US" style="forced-color-adjust: none; font-size: 10pt; color: blue;">SEI</span></b><b style="forced-color-adjust: none;"><span style="forced-color-adjust: none; font-size: 10pt; font-family: 宋体; color: blue;">电导率下降、锂离子的固相扩散率减小、负极过电位增大</span></b><b style="forced-color-adjust: none;"><span lang="EN-US" style="forced-color-adjust: none; font-size: 10pt; font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;, serif; color: blue;">[1]</span></b><b style="forced-color-adjust: none;"><span style="forced-color-adjust: none; font-size: 10pt; font-family: 宋体; color: blue;">。这些低温引起的变化将导致电池的输出功率、能量密度和使用寿命大幅衰减，甚至影响电池的使用安全性</span></b><b style="forced-color-adjust: none;"><span lang="EN-US" style="forced-color-adjust: none; font-size: 10pt; font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;, serif; color: blue;">[2]</span></b><b style="forced-color-adjust: none;"><span style="forced-color-adjust: none; font-size: 10pt; font-family: 宋体; color: blue;">。此外，以石墨为负极的锂离子电池在低温下内阻会陡增，同时析锂风险增加，导致充放电性能下降</span></b><b style="forced-color-adjust: none;"><span lang="EN-US" style="forced-color-adjust: none; font-size: 10pt; font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;, serif; color: blue;">[108]</span></b><b style="forced-color-adjust: none;"><span style="forced-color-adjust: none; font-size: 10pt; font-family: 宋体; color: blue;">。</span></b><span style="forced-color-adjust: none; font-size: 10pt; font-family: 宋体;">（</span><span lang="EN-US" style="forced-color-adjust: none; font-size: 10pt; font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;, serif;">1.3.1</span><span style="forced-color-adjust: none; font-size: 10pt; font-family: 宋体;">低温预热设计</span><span lang="EN-US" style="forced-color-adjust: none; font-size: 10pt; font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;, serif;">/</span><span style="forced-color-adjust: none; font-size: 10pt; font-family: 宋体;">第一段）</span><span lang="EN-US" style="forced-color-adjust: none; font-size: 10pt; font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;, serif;"></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="forced-color-adjust: none; color: rgb(0, 0, 0); font-family: Helvetica; font-size: 12px; font-style: normal; font-variant-ligatures: normal; font-variant-caps: normal; font-weight: 400; letter-spacing: normal; orphans: 2; text-align: left; text-indent: 0px; text-transform: none; widows: 2; word-spacing: 0px; -webkit-text-stroke-width: 0px; white-space: normal; background-color: rgb(255, 255, 255); text-decoration-thickness: initial; text-decoration-style: initial; text-decoration-color: initial; margin-bottom: 0.0001pt; line-height: 20pt;"><b style="forced-color-adjust: none;"><span lang="EN-US" style="forced-color-adjust: none; font-size: 10pt; font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;, serif; color: blue;">&nbsp;</span></b></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="forced-color-adjust: none; color: rgb(0, 0, 0); font-family: Helvetica; font-size: 12px; font-style: normal; font-variant-ligatures: normal; font-variant-caps: normal; font-weight: 400; letter-spacing: normal; orphans: 2; text-align: left; text-indent: 0px; text-transform: none; widows: 2; word-spacing: 0px; -webkit-text-stroke-width: 0px; white-space: normal; background-color: rgb(255, 255, 255); text-decoration-thickness: initial; text-decoration-style: initial; text-decoration-color: initial; margin-bottom: 0.0001pt; line-height: 20pt;"><span lang="EN-US" style="forced-color-adjust: none; font-size: 10pt;">[1] ZHANG S S,<br style="forced-color-adjust: none;">XU K, JOW T R. The low temperature performance of Li-ion batteries[J]. Journal<br style="forced-color-adjust: none;">of Power Sources, 2003, 115(1):137-140.</span><span lang="EN-US" style="forced-color-adjust: none; font-size: 12pt; font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;, serif; color: blue;"></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="forced-color-adjust: none; color: rgb(0, 0, 0); font-family: Helvetica; font-size: 12px; font-style: normal; font-variant-ligatures: normal; font-variant-caps: normal; font-weight: 400; letter-spacing: normal; orphans: 2; text-align: left; text-indent: 0px; text-transform: none; widows: 2; word-spacing: 0px; -webkit-text-stroke-width: 0px; white-space: normal; background-color: rgb(255, 255, 255); text-decoration-thickness: initial; text-decoration-style: initial; text-decoration-color: initial; margin-bottom: 0.0001pt; line-height: 20pt;"><span lang="EN-US" style="forced-color-adjust: none; font-size: 10pt;">[2]</span><span style="forced-color-adjust: none; font-size: 10pt; font-family: 宋体;">王军</span><span lang="EN-US" style="forced-color-adjust: none; font-size: 10pt; font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;, serif;">,<span>&nbsp;</span></span><span style="forced-color-adjust: none; font-size: 10pt;">阮琳</span><span lang="EN-US" style="forced-color-adjust: none; font-size: 10pt; font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;, serif;">,<span>&nbsp;</span></span><span style="forced-color-adjust: none; font-size: 10pt; font-family: 宋体;">邱彦靓</span><span lang="EN-US" style="forced-color-adjust: none; font-size: 10pt; font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;, serif;">.<span>&nbsp;</span></span><span style="forced-color-adjust: none; font-size: 10pt; font-family: 宋体;">锂离子电池低温快速加热方法研究进展</span><span lang="EN-US" style="forced-color-adjust: none; font-size: 10pt; font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;, serif;">[J].<span>&nbsp;</span></span><span style="forced-color-adjust: none; font-size: 10pt; font-family: 宋体;">储能科学与技术</span><span lang="EN-US" style="forced-color-adjust: none; font-size: 10pt; font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;, serif;">, 2022, 11(5): 1563-1574.</span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="forced-color-adjust: none; color: rgb(0, 0, 0); font-family: Helvetica; font-size: 12px; font-style: normal; font-variant-ligatures: normal; font-variant-caps: normal; font-weight: 400; letter-spacing: normal; orphans: 2; text-align: left; text-indent: 0px; text-transform: none; widows: 2; word-spacing: 0px; -webkit-text-stroke-width: 0px; white-space: normal; background-color: rgb(255, 255, 255); text-decoration-thickness: initial; text-decoration-style: initial; text-decoration-color: initial; margin-bottom: 0.0001pt; line-height: 20pt;"><span lang="EN-US" style="forced-color-adjust: none; font-size: 10pt;">WANG Jun, RUAN<br style="forced-color-adjust: none;">Lin, QIU Yanliang. Research progress on rapid heating methods for lithium-ion battery<br style="forced-color-adjust: none;">in low-temperature[J]. Energy Storage Science and Technology, 2022, 11(5): 1563-1574.<br style="forced-color-adjust: none;"></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="forced-color-adjust: none; color: rgb(0, 0, 0); font-family: Helvetica; font-size: 12px; font-style: normal; font-variant-ligatures: normal; font-variant-caps: normal; font-weight: 400; letter-spacing: normal; orphans: 2; text-align: left; text-indent: 0px; text-transform: none; widows: 2; word-spacing: 0px; -webkit-text-stroke-width: 0px; white-space: normal; background-color: rgb(255, 255, 255); text-decoration-thickness: initial; text-decoration-style: initial; text-decoration-color: initial; margin-bottom: 0.0001pt; line-height: 20pt;"><span lang="EN-US" style="forced-color-adjust: none; font-size: 12pt; font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;, serif; color: blue;">&nbsp;</span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="forced-color-adjust: none; color: rgb(0, 0, 0); font-family: Helvetica; font-size: 12px; font-style: normal; font-variant-ligatures: normal; font-variant-caps: normal; font-weight: 400; letter-spacing: normal; orphans: 2; text-align: left; text-indent: 0px; text-transform: none; widows: 2; word-spacing: 0px; -webkit-text-stroke-width: 0px; white-space: normal; background-color: rgb(255, 255, 255); text-decoration-thickness: initial; text-decoration-style: initial; text-decoration-color: initial; margin-bottom: 0.0001pt; line-height: 20pt;"><span style="forced-color-adjust: none; font-size: 12pt; font-family: 宋体;">意见<span lang="EN-US" style="forced-color-adjust: none;">3</span>：<span lang="EN-US" style="forced-color-adjust: none;">1.3.1</span>中建议增加低温预热技术的论文引用。比如脉冲电流低温加热，然后切换快充等文献。目前只是描述了一个现象，没有论述解决方案。<span lang="EN-US" style="forced-color-adjust: none;"></span></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="forced-color-adjust: none; color: rgb(0, 0, 0); font-family: Helvetica; font-size: 12px; font-style: normal; font-variant-ligatures: normal; font-variant-caps: normal; font-weight: 400; letter-spacing: normal; orphans: 2; text-align: left; text-indent: 0px; text-transform: none; widows: 2; word-spacing: 0px; -webkit-text-stroke-width: 0px; white-space: normal; background-color: rgb(255, 255, 255); text-decoration-thickness: initial; text-decoration-style: initial; text-decoration-color: initial; margin-bottom: 0.0001pt; line-height: 20pt;"><span style="forced-color-adjust: none; font-size: 12pt; font-family: 宋体; color: blue;">回复：感谢您的建议，低温预热是快速充电中一个十分重要的主题，为了完善该研究方向的介绍，我们补充了一些文献以及相关的介绍，具体如下。</span><span lang="EN-US" style="forced-color-adjust: none; font-size: 12pt; font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;, serif; color: blue;"></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="forced-color-adjust: none; color: rgb(0, 0, 0); font-family: Helvetica; font-size: 12px; font-style: normal; font-variant-ligatures: normal; font-variant-caps: normal; font-weight: 400; letter-spacing: normal; orphans: 2; text-align: left; text-indent: 0px; text-transform: none; widows: 2; word-spacing: 0px; -webkit-text-stroke-width: 0px; white-space: normal; background-color: rgb(255, 255, 255); text-decoration-thickness: initial; text-decoration-style: initial; text-decoration-color: initial; margin-bottom: 0.0001pt; line-height: 20pt;"><span style="forced-color-adjust: none; font-size: 10pt;">低温预热方法根据加热方式可以分为内部加热法</span><span lang="EN-US" style="forced-color-adjust: none; font-size: 10pt; font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;, serif;">[72]</span><span style="forced-color-adjust: none; font-size: 10pt; font-family: 宋体;">与外部传热法</span><span lang="EN-US" style="forced-color-adjust: none; font-size: 10pt; font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;, serif;">[73]</span><span style="forced-color-adjust: none; font-size: 10pt; font-family: 宋体;">。内部加热法一般通过内部交流</span><span lang="EN-US" style="forced-color-adjust: none; font-size: 10pt; font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;, serif;">/</span><span style="forced-color-adjust: none; font-size: 10pt; font-family: 宋体;">直流电流对电池进行自加热。外部传热法将外部电路产生的热量传给电池对其加热，包括对流传热与接触传热两种方式。</span><span lang="EN-US" style="forced-color-adjust: none; font-size: 10pt; font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;, serif;"></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="forced-color-adjust: none; color: rgb(0, 0, 0); font-family: Helvetica; font-size: 12px; font-style: normal; font-variant-ligatures: normal; font-variant-caps: normal; font-weight: 400; letter-spacing: normal; orphans: 2; text-align: left; text-indent: 0px; text-transform: none; widows: 2; word-spacing: 0px; -webkit-text-stroke-width: 0px; white-space: normal; background-color: rgb(255, 255, 255); text-decoration-thickness: initial; text-decoration-style: initial; text-decoration-color: initial; margin-bottom: 0.0001pt; line-height: 20pt;"><span lang="EN-US" style="forced-color-adjust: none; font-size: 10pt; color: rgb(192, 0, 0);">Liu</span><span style="forced-color-adjust: none; font-size: 10pt; font-family: 宋体; color: rgb(192, 0, 0);">等</span><span lang="EN-US" style="forced-color-adjust: none; font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;, serif; color: rgb(192, 0, 0);">[1]</span><span style="forced-color-adjust: none; font-family: 宋体;">通过脉冲电流对电池进行内部加热，预热完成后通过</span><span lang="EN-US" style="forced-color-adjust: none; font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;, serif; color: rgb(192, 0, 0);">CCCV</span><span style="forced-color-adjust: none; font-family: 宋体;">协议充电。实验结果表明脉冲电流输入有助于提高锂离子分布的均匀性，提高电池充电性能。</span><span lang="EN-US" style="forced-color-adjust: none; font-size: 10pt; font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;, serif; color: rgb(192, 0, 0);"></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="forced-color-adjust: none; color: rgb(0, 0, 0); font-family: Helvetica; font-size: 12px; font-style: normal; font-variant-ligatures: normal; font-variant-caps: normal; font-weight: 400; letter-spacing: normal; orphans: 2; text-align: left; text-indent: 0px; text-transform: none; widows: 2; word-spacing: 0px; -webkit-text-stroke-width: 0px; white-space: normal; background-color: rgb(255, 255, 255); text-decoration-thickness: initial; text-decoration-style: initial; text-decoration-color: initial; margin-bottom: 0.0001pt; line-height: 20pt;"><span style="forced-color-adjust: none; font-size: 10pt;">低温预热设计是应对低温充电问题的有效措施，然而这类方法在实际应用中仍然存在一些问题</span><span lang="EN-US" style="forced-color-adjust: none; font-size: 10pt; font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;, serif;">[74]</span><span style="forced-color-adjust: none; font-size: 10pt; font-family: 宋体;">需要解决：</span><span lang="EN-US" style="forced-color-adjust: none; font-size: 10pt; font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;, serif;">1)<span>&nbsp;</span></span><span style="forced-color-adjust: none; font-size: 10pt; font-family: 宋体;">切换温度是预热阶段与充电阶段的分界温度，会直接影响预热效果，因此如何优化切换温度是预热设计的关键；</span><span lang="EN-US" style="forced-color-adjust: none; font-size: 10pt; font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;, serif;">2)<span>&nbsp;</span></span><span style="forced-color-adjust: none; font-size: 10pt; font-family: 宋体;">预热后的电池状态变化会对充电过程造成影响，需要对其有效预测并实施控制；</span><span lang="EN-US" style="forced-color-adjust: none; font-size: 10pt; font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;, serif;">3)<span>&nbsp;</span></span><span style="forced-color-adjust: none; font-size: 10pt; font-family: 宋体;">虽然有些研究提出了可行的预热方法，但较少涉及对整个低温充电过程进行优化。</span><span lang="EN-US" style="forced-color-adjust: none; font-size: 10pt; font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;, serif;"></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="forced-color-adjust: none; color: rgb(0, 0, 0); font-family: Helvetica; font-size: 12px; font-style: normal; font-variant-ligatures: normal; font-variant-caps: normal; font-weight: 400; letter-spacing: normal; orphans: 2; text-align: left; text-indent: 0px; text-transform: none; widows: 2; word-spacing: 0px; -webkit-text-stroke-width: 0px; white-space: normal; background-color: rgb(255, 255, 255); text-decoration-thickness: initial; text-decoration-style: initial; text-decoration-color: initial; margin-bottom: 0.0001pt; line-height: 20pt;"><span lang="EN-US" style="forced-color-adjust: none; font-size: 12pt; font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;, serif;">&nbsp;</span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="forced-color-adjust: none; color: rgb(0, 0, 0); font-family: Helvetica; font-size: 12px; font-style: normal; font-variant-ligatures: normal; font-variant-caps: normal; font-weight: 400; letter-spacing: normal; orphans: 2; text-align: left; text-indent: 0px; text-transform: none; widows: 2; word-spacing: 0px; -webkit-text-stroke-width: 0px; white-space: normal; background-color: rgb(255, 255, 255); text-decoration-thickness: initial; text-decoration-style: initial; text-decoration-color: initial; margin-bottom: 0.0001pt; line-height: 20pt;"><span lang="EN-US" style="forced-color-adjust: none; font-size: 12pt; font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;, serif;">&nbsp;[1]LIU J H,<br style="forced-color-adjust: none;">WANG X. Investigating effects of pulse charging on performance of Li-ion<br style="forced-color-adjust: none;">batteries at low temperature[J]. Journal of Power Sources, 2023, 574. No: 233177.</span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="forced-color-adjust: none; color: rgb(0, 0, 0); font-family: Helvetica; font-size: 12px; font-style: normal; font-variant-ligatures: normal; font-variant-caps: normal; font-weight: 400; letter-spacing: normal; orphans: 2; text-align: left; text-indent: 0px; text-transform: none; widows: 2; word-spacing: 0px; -webkit-text-stroke-width: 0px; white-space: normal; background-color: rgb(255, 255, 255); text-decoration-thickness: initial; text-decoration-style: initial; text-decoration-color: initial; margin-bottom: 0.0001pt; line-height: 20pt;"><span lang="EN-US" style="forced-color-adjust: none; font-size: 12pt; font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;, serif;">[2]A state of charge-aware internal preheating<br style="forced-color-adjust: none;">strategy for Li-ion batteries at low temperatures.</span><span lang="EN-US" style="forced-color-adjust: none;"><span>&nbsp;</span></span><span lang="EN-US" style="forced-color-adjust: none; font-size: 12pt; font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;, serif;">Journal of Energy Storage.</span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="forced-color-adjust: none; color: rgb(0, 0, 0); font-family: Helvetica; font-size: 12px; font-style: normal; font-variant-ligatures: normal; font-variant-caps: normal; font-weight: 400; letter-spacing: normal; orphans: 2; text-align: left; text-indent: 0px; text-transform: none; widows: 2; word-spacing: 0px; -webkit-text-stroke-width: 0px; white-space: normal; background-color: rgb(255, 255, 255); text-decoration-thickness: initial; text-decoration-style: initial; text-decoration-color: initial; margin-bottom: 0.0001pt; line-height: 20pt;"><span lang="EN-US" style="forced-color-adjust: none; font-size: 12pt; font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;, serif;">[3]Experimental study on self-heating strategy of<br style="forced-color-adjust: none;">lithium-ion battery at low temperatures based on bidirectional pulse current.</span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="forced-color-adjust: none; color: rgb(0, 0, 0); font-family: Helvetica; font-size: 12px; font-style: normal; font-variant-ligatures: normal; font-variant-caps: normal; font-weight: 400; letter-spacing: normal; orphans: 2; text-align: left; text-indent: 0px; text-transform: none; widows: 2; word-spacing: 0px; -webkit-text-stroke-width: 0px; white-space: normal; background-color: rgb(255, 255, 255); text-decoration-thickness: initial; text-decoration-style: initial; text-decoration-color: initial; margin-bottom: 0.0001pt; line-height: 20pt;"><span lang="EN-US" style="forced-color-adjust: none; font-size: 12pt; font-family: 宋体;">&nbsp;</span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="forced-color-adjust: none; color: rgb(0, 0, 0); font-family: Helvetica; font-size: 12px; font-style: normal; font-variant-ligatures: normal; font-variant-caps: normal; font-weight: 400; letter-spacing: normal; orphans: 2; text-align: left; text-indent: 0px; text-transform: none; widows: 2; word-spacing: 0px; -webkit-text-stroke-width: 0px; white-space: normal; background-color: rgb(255, 255, 255); text-decoration-thickness: initial; text-decoration-style: initial; text-decoration-color: initial; margin-bottom: 0.0001pt; line-height: 20pt;"><span style="forced-color-adjust: none; font-size: 12pt; font-family: 宋体;">意见<span lang="EN-US" style="forced-color-adjust: none;">4</span>：<span lang="EN-US" style="forced-color-adjust: none;">2.1</span>的内容与后文没啥关联，也没有涉及与快充相关的电池机理，建议去掉。<span lang="EN-US" style="forced-color-adjust: none;"></span></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="forced-color-adjust: none; color: rgb(0, 0, 0); font-family: Helvetica; font-size: 12px; font-style: normal; font-variant-ligatures: normal; font-variant-caps: normal; font-weight: 400; letter-spacing: normal; orphans: 2; text-align: left; text-indent: 0px; text-transform: none; widows: 2; word-spacing: 0px; -webkit-text-stroke-width: 0px; white-space: normal; background-color: rgb(255, 255, 255); text-decoration-thickness: initial; text-decoration-style: initial; text-decoration-color: initial; margin-bottom: 0.0001pt; line-height: 20pt;"><span style="forced-color-adjust: none; font-size: 12pt; font-family: 宋体; color: blue;">回复：感谢您提出的问题与建议，原稿件的<span lang="EN-US" style="forced-color-adjust: none;">2.1</span>锂离子电池机理简介用以衔接<span lang="EN-US" style="forced-color-adjust: none;">2.2</span>物理建模方法。然而该部分与综述主题快充策略设计的关联不深，为了突出主题，我们删除了<span lang="EN-US" style="forced-color-adjust: none;">2.1</span>锂离子电池机理简介，并重排了第二章节。具体可参见稿件的第二章节。<span lang="EN-US" style="forced-color-adjust: none;"></span></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="forced-color-adjust: none; color: rgb(0, 0, 0); font-family: Helvetica; font-size: 12px; font-style: normal; font-variant-ligatures: normal; font-variant-caps: normal; font-weight: 400; letter-spacing: normal; orphans: 2; text-align: left; text-indent: 0px; text-transform: none; widows: 2; word-spacing: 0px; -webkit-text-stroke-width: 0px; white-space: normal; background-color: rgb(255, 255, 255); text-decoration-thickness: initial; text-decoration-style: initial; text-decoration-color: initial; margin-bottom: 0.0001pt; line-height: 20pt;"><span lang="EN-US" style="forced-color-adjust: none; font-size: 12pt; font-family: 宋体;">&nbsp;</span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="forced-color-adjust: none; color: rgb(0, 0, 0); font-family: Helvetica; font-size: 12px; font-style: normal; font-variant-ligatures: normal; font-variant-caps: normal; font-weight: 400; letter-spacing: normal; orphans: 2; text-align: left; text-indent: 0px; text-transform: none; widows: 2; word-spacing: 0px; -webkit-text-stroke-width: 0px; white-space: normal; background-color: rgb(255, 255, 255); text-decoration-thickness: initial; text-decoration-style: initial; text-decoration-color: initial; margin-bottom: 0.0001pt; line-height: 20pt;"><span style="forced-color-adjust: none; font-size: 12pt; font-family: 宋体;">意见<span lang="EN-US" style="forced-color-adjust: none;">5</span>：<span lang="EN-US" style="forced-color-adjust: none;">2.2</span>的物理建模部分作者更注重的是介绍模型的基本原理。但是本文的主题是电池快充策略，因此重点应该是介绍这些模型如何用于快充策略开发的。<span lang="EN-US" style="forced-color-adjust: none;"></span></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="forced-color-adjust: none; color: rgb(0, 0, 0); font-family: Helvetica; font-size: 12px; font-style: normal; font-variant-ligatures: normal; font-variant-caps: normal; font-weight: 400; letter-spacing: normal; orphans: 2; text-align: left; text-indent: 0px; text-transform: none; widows: 2; word-spacing: 0px; -webkit-text-stroke-width: 0px; white-space: normal; background-color: rgb(255, 255, 255); text-decoration-thickness: initial; text-decoration-style: initial; text-decoration-color: initial; margin-bottom: 0.0001pt; line-height: 20pt;"><span style="forced-color-adjust: none; font-size: 12pt; font-family: 宋体; color: blue;">回复：电池模型是快速充电策略的重要组成部分，<span lang="EN-US" style="forced-color-adjust: none;"></span></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="forced-color-adjust: none; color: rgb(0, 0, 0); font-family: Helvetica; font-size: 12px; font-style: normal; font-variant-ligatures: normal; font-variant-caps: normal; font-weight: 400; letter-spacing: normal; orphans: 2; text-align: left; text-indent: 0px; text-transform: none; widows: 2; word-spacing: 0px; -webkit-text-stroke-width: 0px; white-space: normal; background-color: rgb(255, 255, 255); text-decoration-thickness: initial; text-decoration-style: initial; text-decoration-color: initial; margin-bottom: 0.0001pt; line-height: 20pt;"><span lang="EN-US" style="forced-color-adjust: none; font-size: 12pt; font-family: 宋体; color: blue;">+</span><span style="forced-color-adjust: none; font-size: 12pt; color: blue;">物理部分的修改（审稿人<span lang="EN-US" style="forced-color-adjust: none;">1</span>的问题<span lang="EN-US" style="forced-color-adjust: none;">2</span>）<span lang="EN-US" style="forced-color-adjust: none;"></span></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="forced-color-adjust: none; color: rgb(0, 0, 0); font-family: Helvetica; font-size: 12px; font-style: normal; font-variant-ligatures: normal; font-variant-caps: normal; font-weight: 400; letter-spacing: normal; orphans: 2; text-align: left; text-indent: 0px; text-transform: none; widows: 2; word-spacing: 0px; -webkit-text-stroke-width: 0px; white-space: normal; background-color: rgb(255, 255, 255); text-decoration-thickness: initial; text-decoration-style: initial; text-decoration-color: initial; margin-bottom: 0.0001pt; line-height: 20pt;"><span lang="EN-US" style="forced-color-adjust: none; font-size: 12pt; font-family: 宋体;">&nbsp;</span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="forced-color-adjust: none; color: rgb(0, 0, 0); font-family: Helvetica; font-size: 12px; font-style: normal; font-variant-ligatures: normal; font-variant-caps: normal; font-weight: 400; letter-spacing: normal; orphans: 2; text-align: left; text-indent: 0px; text-transform: none; widows: 2; word-spacing: 0px; -webkit-text-stroke-width: 0px; white-space: normal; background-color: rgb(255, 255, 255); text-decoration-thickness: initial; text-decoration-style: initial; text-decoration-color: initial; margin-bottom: 0.0001pt; line-height: 20pt;"><span style="forced-color-adjust: none; font-size: 12pt; font-family: 宋体;">意见<span lang="EN-US" style="forced-color-adjust: none;">6</span>：本文的主题是快充策略，但是从图<span lang="EN-US" style="forced-color-adjust: none;">7</span>中完全没有看到快充相关的内容。<span lang="EN-US" style="forced-color-adjust: none;"></span></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="forced-color-adjust: none; color: rgb(0, 0, 0); font-family: Helvetica; font-size: 12px; font-style: normal; font-variant-ligatures: normal; font-variant-caps: normal; font-weight: 400; letter-spacing: normal; orphans: 2; text-align: left; text-indent: 0px; text-transform: none; widows: 2; word-spacing: 0px; -webkit-text-stroke-width: 0px; white-space: normal; background-color: rgb(255, 255, 255); text-decoration-thickness: initial; text-decoration-style: initial; text-decoration-color: initial; margin-bottom: 0.0001pt; line-height: 20pt;"><span style="forced-color-adjust: none; font-size: 12pt; font-family: 宋体; color: blue;">回复：在图七的介绍中加入一些必要的说明<span lang="EN-US" style="forced-color-adjust: none;"></span></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="forced-color-adjust: none; color: rgb(0, 0, 0); font-family: Helvetica; font-size: 12px; font-style: normal; font-variant-ligatures: normal; font-variant-caps: normal; font-weight: 400; letter-spacing: normal; orphans: 2; text-align: left; text-indent: 0px; text-transform: none; widows: 2; word-spacing: 0px; -webkit-text-stroke-width: 0px; white-space: normal; background-color: rgb(255, 255, 255); text-decoration-thickness: initial; text-decoration-style: initial; text-decoration-color: initial; margin-bottom: 0.0001pt; line-height: 20pt;"><span lang="EN-US" style="forced-color-adjust: none; font-size: 12pt; font-family: 宋体;">&nbsp;</span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="forced-color-adjust: none; color: rgb(0, 0, 0); font-family: Helvetica; font-size: 12px; font-style: normal; font-variant-ligatures: normal; font-variant-caps: normal; font-weight: 400; letter-spacing: normal; orphans: 2; text-align: left; text-indent: 0px; text-transform: none; widows: 2; word-spacing: 0px; -webkit-text-stroke-width: 0px; white-space: normal; background-color: rgb(255, 255, 255); text-decoration-thickness: initial; text-decoration-style: initial; text-decoration-color: initial; margin-bottom: 0.0001pt; line-height: 20pt;"><span style="forced-color-adjust: none; font-size: 12pt; font-family: 宋体;">意见<span lang="EN-US" style="forced-color-adjust: none;">7</span>：<span lang="EN-US" style="forced-color-adjust: none;">2.2</span>的机器学习建模方法介绍的都是估计<span lang="EN-US" style="forced-color-adjust: none;">SOC</span>，老化的，并没有快充相关的机器学习算法。建议作者进行修改。<span lang="EN-US" style="forced-color-adjust: none;"></span></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="forced-color-adjust: none; color: rgb(0, 0, 0); font-family: Helvetica; font-size: 12px; font-style: normal; font-variant-ligatures: normal; font-variant-caps: normal; font-weight: 400; letter-spacing: normal; orphans: 2; text-align: left; text-indent: 0px; text-transform: none; widows: 2; word-spacing: 0px; -webkit-text-stroke-width: 0px; white-space: normal; background-color: rgb(255, 255, 255); text-decoration-thickness: initial; text-decoration-style: initial; text-decoration-color: initial; margin-bottom: 0.0001pt; line-height: 20pt;"><span style="forced-color-adjust: none; font-size: 12pt; font-family: 宋体; color: blue;">回复：现有的机器学习算法前面加上了其对于快充的意义<span lang="EN-US" style="forced-color-adjust: none;"></span></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="forced-color-adjust: none; color: rgb(0, 0, 0); font-family: Helvetica; font-size: 12px; font-style: normal; font-variant-ligatures: normal; font-variant-caps: normal; font-weight: 400; letter-spacing: normal; orphans: 2; text-align: left; text-indent: 0px; text-transform: none; widows: 2; word-spacing: 0px; -webkit-text-stroke-width: 0px; white-space: normal; background-color: rgb(255, 255, 255); text-decoration-thickness: initial; text-decoration-style: initial; text-decoration-color: initial; margin-bottom: 0.0001pt; line-height: 20pt;"><span lang="EN-US" style="forced-color-adjust: none; font-size: 12pt; font-family: 宋体; color: blue;">+</span><span style="forced-color-adjust: none; font-size: 12pt; color: blue;">机器学习部分的修改（审稿人<span lang="EN-US" style="forced-color-adjust: none;">1</span>的问题<span lang="EN-US" style="forced-color-adjust: none;">2</span>）<span lang="EN-US" style="forced-color-adjust: none;"></span></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="forced-color-adjust: none; color: rgb(0, 0, 0); font-family: Helvetica; font-size: 12px; font-style: normal; font-variant-ligatures: normal; font-variant-caps: normal; font-weight: 400; letter-spacing: normal; orphans: 2; text-align: left; text-indent: 0px; text-transform: none; widows: 2; word-spacing: 0px; -webkit-text-stroke-width: 0px; white-space: normal; background-color: rgb(255, 255, 255); text-decoration-thickness: initial; text-decoration-style: initial; text-decoration-color: initial; margin-bottom: 0.0001pt; line-height: 20pt;"><span lang="EN-US" style="forced-color-adjust: none; font-size: 12pt; font-family: 宋体;">&nbsp;</span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="forced-color-adjust: none; color: rgb(0, 0, 0); font-family: Helvetica; font-size: 12px; font-style: normal; font-variant-ligatures: normal; font-variant-caps: normal; font-weight: 400; letter-spacing: normal; orphans: 2; text-align: left; text-indent: 0px; text-transform: none; widows: 2; word-spacing: 0px; -webkit-text-stroke-width: 0px; white-space: normal; background-color: rgb(255, 255, 255); text-decoration-thickness: initial; text-decoration-style: initial; text-decoration-color: initial; margin-bottom: 0.0001pt; line-height: 20pt;"><span style="forced-color-adjust: none; font-size: 12pt; font-family: 宋体;">意见<span lang="EN-US" style="forced-color-adjust: none;">8</span>：文章的整体结构有待改进。论文中电池模型建立部分的内容没有和充电问题描述，充电方法设计两个部分关联起来。导致阅读的时候，感觉到电池模型建立脱离了文章主题。<span lang="EN-US" style="forced-color-adjust: none;"></span></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="forced-color-adjust: none; color: rgb(0, 0, 0); font-family: Helvetica; font-size: 12px; font-style: normal; font-variant-ligatures: normal; font-variant-caps: normal; font-weight: 400; letter-spacing: normal; orphans: 2; text-align: left; text-indent: 0px; text-transform: none; widows: 2; word-spacing: 0px; -webkit-text-stroke-width: 0px; white-space: normal; background-color: rgb(255, 255, 255); text-decoration-thickness: initial; text-decoration-style: initial; text-decoration-color: initial; margin-bottom: 0.0001pt; line-height: 20pt;"><span style="forced-color-adjust: none; font-size: 12pt; font-family: 宋体; color: blue;">回复：导致电池模型建立部分未能很好地融入快速充电策略设计的主题。<span lang="EN-US" style="forced-color-adjust: none;"></span></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="forced-color-adjust: none; color: rgb(0, 0, 0); font-family: Helvetica; font-size: 12px; font-style: normal; font-variant-ligatures: normal; font-variant-caps: normal; font-weight: 400; letter-spacing: normal; orphans: 2; text-align: left; text-indent: 0px; text-transform: none; widows: 2; word-spacing: 0px; -webkit-text-stroke-width: 0px; white-space: normal; background-color: rgb(255, 255, 255); text-decoration-thickness: initial; text-decoration-style: initial; text-decoration-color: initial; margin-bottom: 0.0001pt; line-height: 20pt;"><span lang="EN-US" style="forced-color-adjust: none; font-size: 12pt; font-family: 宋体; color: blue;">1.</span><span style="forced-color-adjust: none; font-size: 12pt; color: blue;">缩减了不必要的内容，调整了两个部分之间的内容<span lang="EN-US" style="forced-color-adjust: none;"></span></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="forced-color-adjust: none; color: rgb(0, 0, 0); font-family: Helvetica; font-size: 12px; font-style: normal; font-variant-ligatures: normal; font-variant-caps: normal; font-weight: 400; letter-spacing: normal; orphans: 2; text-align: left; text-indent: 0px; text-transform: none; widows: 2; word-spacing: 0px; -webkit-text-stroke-width: 0px; white-space: normal; background-color: rgb(255, 255, 255); text-decoration-thickness: initial; text-decoration-style: initial; text-decoration-color: initial; margin-bottom: 0.0001pt; line-height: 20pt;"><span lang="EN-US" style="forced-color-adjust: none; font-size: 12pt; font-family: 宋体; color: blue;">2.</span><span style="forced-color-adjust: none; font-size: 12pt; color: blue;">补充了其与快速充电之间的密切联系<span lang="EN-US" style="forced-color-adjust: none;"></span></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="forced-color-adjust: none; color: rgb(0, 0, 0); font-family: Helvetica; font-size: 12px; font-style: normal; font-variant-ligatures: normal; font-variant-caps: normal; font-weight: 400; 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