From 8d27161fba92c230a740db6960f4a7d4931b20f6 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Janas Page <janaspage@users.noreply.github.com>
Date: Fri, 18 Apr 2014 16:56:53 -0700
Subject: [PATCH] Rewording of demo-code narrative.

Trying to be more specific in description and order.
---
 README.md | 10 +++++-----
 1 file changed, 5 insertions(+), 5 deletions(-)

diff --git a/README.md b/README.md
index 4d5f631988c6e0..f15be829e87ff9 100644
--- a/README.md
+++ b/README.md
@@ -17,12 +17,12 @@ Alternatively see [how to build the library yourself](https://github.com/mrdoob/
 <script src="js/three.min.js"></script>
 ```
 
-This code creates a scene, then creates a camera, adds the camera and cube to the scene, creates a &lt;canvas&gt; renderer and adds its viewport in the document.body element.
+This code creates a scene, a camera, and a geometric cube, and it adds the cube to the scene. It then creates a &lt;canvas&gt; renderer for the scene and camera, and it adds that viewport to the document.body element. Finally it animates the cube within the scene for the camera.
 
 ```html
 <script>
 
-	var camera, scene, renderer;
+	var scene, camera, renderer;
 	var geometry, material, mesh;
 
 	init();
@@ -30,15 +30,15 @@ This code creates a scene, then creates a camera, adds the camera and cube to th
 
 	function init() {
 
+		scene = new THREE.Scene();
+		
 		camera = new THREE.PerspectiveCamera( 75, window.innerWidth / window.innerHeight, 1, 10000 );
 		camera.position.z = 1000;
 
-		scene = new THREE.Scene();
-
 		geometry = new THREE.BoxGeometry( 200, 200, 200 );
 		material = new THREE.MeshBasicMaterial( { color: 0xff0000, wireframe: true } );
-
 		mesh = new THREE.Mesh( geometry, material );
+		
 		scene.add( mesh );
 
 		renderer = new THREE.CanvasRenderer();