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…rans#932) * Refine Language and Inclusivity in MtF.wiki Introduction This commit aims to enhance the language and inclusivity of MtF.wiki's introduction. Changes include using more inclusive terms like "transgender individuals" and refining the description of MtF (Male-to-Female) to emphasize gender identity. The edits aim to create a more welcoming and respectful environment for diverse transgender experiences. Additionally, minor adjustments were made for clarity and coherence throughout the document. Signed-off-by: 跨性别 <[email protected]> * Update about.md Signed-off-by: 跨性别 <[email protected]> * Update _index.md Signed-off-by: 跨性别 <[email protected]> * Update singapore-hrt-overview.md Typo fixes Signed-off-by: 跨性别 <[email protected]> * Update singapore-hrt-overview.md Signed-off-by: 跨性别 <[email protected]> * replace "me" with "us" Signed-off-by: 跨性别 <[email protected]> * Update README-EN.md Signed-off-by: 跨性别 <[email protected]> * Update README-EN.md Signed-off-by: 跨性别 <[email protected]> * Update README-EN.md Signed-off-by: 跨性别 <[email protected]> * Improvements. "goes" isn't grammatically correct in this sentence, the correct wording is "go" when referring to multiple people. Signed-off-by: 跨性别 <[email protected]> * Update singapore-hrt-overview.md Signed-off-by: 跨性别 <[email protected]> * Update README-EN.md Signed-off-by: 跨性别 <[email protected]> * Update _index.md Signed-off-by: 跨性别 <[email protected]> * Update _index.md Signed-off-by: 跨性别 <[email protected]> * Update README-EN.md Signed-off-by: 跨性别 <[email protected]> * * Signed-off-by: 跨性别 <[email protected]> --------- Signed-off-by: 跨性别 <[email protected]>
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diff --git a/README-EN.md b/README-EN.md
@@ -11,17 +11,17 @@ Brother Site: [FtM.wiki](https://ftm.wiki)
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 [![GitHub Stars][badge-gh-stars]][repo]
 
-This site was founded initially for China mainland's transgenders. However, if you would like to contribute information for the transgenders in your region, feel free to do so.
+This site was founded initially for mainland China's transgender people. However, if you would like to contribute information for the transgender individuals in your region, please feel free to do so.
 
 ## Content
 
 Welcome to the MtF.wiki. This is a place that may provide help for some transgender women.
 
-MtF (Male-to-Female), or transgender female, refers to a person who was assigned male at birth but identifies as female.
+MtF (Male-to-Female) or transgender female refers to a person who was assigned male at birth but is a woman.
 
-MtF.wiki is committed to becoming a free, open, and continuously updated transgender knowledge integration site, where you can learn about all kinds of medical information and dailylife guides related to transgender.
+MtF.wiki is committed to evolving into a free, open, and constantly updated platform for the integration of transgender knowledge, offering insights into various medical information and everyday living guidelines important to transgender individuals and their experiences.
 
-The MtF.wiki is currently in its early stages of development. Various materials may have not been included, and there may even be some errors. All enthusiastic sisters are welcomed to join us and contribute to the MtF.wiki project.
+The MtF.wiki is currently in its early stages of development. Various resources may have not been included, and there may even be some errors. All enthusiastic contributors are welcome to join us and commit to the MtF.wiki project.
 
 The original intention behind building this website is to provide a knowledge platform for the MtF community and to promote awareness and acceptance of gender transition among others.
 
@@ -41,7 +41,7 @@ Unless otherwise stated, all non-code content on this site is licensed under the
 
 In a nutshell, you are free to share and adapt, but you must give the appropriate credit and share under the same license without additional restrictions.
 
-If you would like to cite this GitHub repo, you can use the bibtex below：
+If you would like to cite this GitHub repo, you can use the BibTeX below：
 
 ```plain
 @misc{mtfwiki,

diff --git a/content/en/about.md b/content/en/about.md
@@ -16,13 +16,13 @@ Project <i class="bi bi-github" aria-label="GitHub"></i> GitHub Repo: [project-t
 
 Brother site: <https://FtM.wiki>
 
-Thanks goes to these GitHub contributors:
+My deepest thanks go to these GitHub contributors:
 
 {{< github/contributors >}}
 
 and other lovely guys who give us help and information.
 
-Contact if u would like to join!
+Contact us if u would like to join!
 
 ## Contact
 

diff --git a/content/en/docs/_index.md b/content/en/docs/_index.md
@@ -8,12 +8,12 @@ draft: false
 Welcome to the {{< mtf-wiki >}}, a place that may help some transgender women.
 
 {{< notice info >}}
-Thought this site was founded initially for Chinese trans, we provide this English page to show our visibility. However, if you would like to contribute information for trans in your region, welcome to do it.
+Though this site was founded initially for Chinese transgender people, we provide this English page to show our visibility. However, if you would like to contribute information for the transgender people in your region, doing so is always welcomed.
 {{< /notice >}}
 
-MtF (Male-to-Female), transgender female, refers to a female whose sex[^1] is male when she was born.
+MtF (Male-to-Female), or transgender female, refers to a female whose gender[^1] was assigned male at birth but is a woman.
 
-{{< mtf-wiki >}} is committed to becoming a free, open and continuously updated transgender knowledge integration site, where you can learn about all kinds of medical information and dailylife guides related to transgender.
+{{< mtf-wiki >}} is committed to evolving into a free, open, and constantly updated platform for the integration of transgender knowledge, offering insights into various medical information and daily life guides relevant to transgender individuals and their experiences.
 
 The current {{< mtf-wiki >}} is in its infancy. Various materials may have not been completed, and there may even be some errors. Welcome all enthusiastic sisters to join us [^2] and contribute to the {{< mtf-wiki >}}.
 

diff --git a/content/en/docs/hrt/singapore/singapore-hrt-overview.md b/content/en/docs/hrt/singapore/singapore-hrt-overview.md
@@ -11,14 +11,14 @@ The main place to get HRT is [Changi General Hospital](https://www.cgh.com.sg/).
 
 The process consists of two steps:
 
-1. Psychiatrist visit (gender disphoria diagnosis)
-1. Endocrinology visit (obtain HRT)
+1. Psychiatrist visit (for a gender dysphoria diagnosis)
+1. Endocrinology visit (for obtaining an HRT prescription)
 
-Singaporeans may first get a referral from a polyclinic to Changi General Hospital for governement subsidies.
+Singaporeans may first get a referral from a polyclinic to Changi General Hospital for government subsidies.
 
-{{<notice warning "For those under 21" >}}
+{{<notice warning "For those under 21 years old" >}}
 
-- 18 to 20, consent from both parents is needed before HRT can commence.
-- Under 18, NO HRT given.
+- For 18- to 20-year-olds, consent from both parents is required before HRT can commence.
+- Under 18 years old, NO HRT is given.
 
 {{</notice>}}