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lvicoun committed Apr 17, 2023
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<term>TOPIC</term>
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The article provides details about the &productnameshort; images intended for use in public clouds. On top of that, you will get information about creating new users of the system.
This article provides details about the &productnameshort; images intended for use in public clouds. On top of that, it also provides information on creating new users of the system.
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&productnameshort; uses several tools for its deployment in public clouds. This topic also describes required disk size, registration and provides details about the default user.
&productnameshort; uses several tools for its deployment in public clouds. This topic also describes required disk size and registration, and provides details about the default user.
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size depends on the number and size of workloads you intend to run.
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As with each run of the &tr-up; command a new snapshot is created, keep
in mind that these snapshots also take some size, even though Btrfs
As with each run of the &tr-up; command, a new snapshot is created. Keep
in mind that these snapshots also take up some size, even though Btrfs
snapshots are space-efficient.
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The root volume automatically grows as you change the size of the
underlying disk. When you are running low on disk space, you can always
stop your instance and make the system disk bigger, up to the limitation
stop your instance and increase the size of the system disk, up to the limitation
of individual disk sizes in each cloud framework.
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xmlns:xlink="http://www.w3.org/1999/xlink"
xmlns:trans="http://docbook.org/ns/transclusion">
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<title>Reconfiguring system after first boot</title>
<title>Reconfiguring the system after first boot</title>
<meta name="maintainer" content="Jana Halackova"/>
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<section xml:id="slemicro-ignition-cloud-introduction">
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To add a regular user without <command>sudo</command> privileges,
proceed as described further:
proceed as described below:
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