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Co-authored-by: Daria Vladykina <[email protected]>
SUSE · May 17, 2024 · c076a99 · c076a99
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diff --git a/articles/deployment-selfinstall-images-bare-metal.asm.xml b/articles/deployment-selfinstall-images-bare-metal.asm.xml
@@ -80,7 +80,7 @@
   <!-- S T R U C T U R E -->
   <structure renderas="article" xml:id="deployment-selfinstall-images" xml:lang="en">
     <merge>
-      <title>Deploying &productnameshort; Using an ISO image</title>
+      <title>Deploying &productnameshort; Using an ISO Image</title>
       <!-- Create changelog to enable versioning; add most recent entries at the top. -->
       <revhistory xml:id="rh-deployment-raw-images">
         <revision><revnumber>1</revnumber><date>2024-01-20</date>

diff --git a/references/combustion-configuration.xml b/references/combustion-configuration.xml
@@ -168,7 +168,7 @@ echo "$(blkid -o export ${partition} | grep ^UUID=) /home btrfs defaults 0 0" >>
     <section xml:id="combustion-adding-users">
       <title>Creating new users</title>
       <para>
-        As some services, for example, &cockpit; requires login using a non-root user, define at
+        As some services, such as &cockpit;, require login using a non-root user, define at
         least one unprivileged user here. Alternatively, you can create such a user from a running
         system as described in <xref linkend="deployment-postinstall-adding-users"/>.
       </para>

diff --git a/references/ignition-configuration.xml b/references/ignition-configuration.xml
@@ -336,14 +336,13 @@
     <section xml:id="sec-ignition-users">
       <title>Users administration</title>
       <para>
-        The <literal>passwd</literal> attribute is used to add users. As some services, for example, &cockpit; requires login using a non-root user, define at
+        The <literal>passwd</literal> attribute is used to add users. As some services, such as &cockpit;, require login using a non-root user, define at
         least one unprivileged user here. Alternatively, you can create such a user from a running
         system as described in <xref linkend="deployment-postinstall-adding-users"/>.
       </para>
       <para>
-        If you
-        intend to log in to your system, create &rootuser; and a regular user and set their
-        passwords.  You need to hash the passwords, for example, by
+        To log in to your system, create &rootuser; and a regular user and set their
+        passwords. You need to hash the passwords, for example, by
         using the <command>openssl</command> command:
       </para>
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