Merge pull request #82 from brendan-oconnell/about-page-changes

Small changes to about page text

app/views/pages/about.html.erb

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       <h1> About this <span class="highlight">project</span></h1>
       <p>The ever-expanding energy consumption of the Internet is a growing
       but often hidden contributor to the climate crisis. Marketing terms
-      like “the cloud” often obscure the dirty infrastructure of server farms
+      like “the cloud” obscure the dirty infrastructure of server farms
       running on fossil fuels and the power consumption of consumer electronics.
       In fact, if the Internet were a country, its emissions would be the 7th-highest
       in the world!
-      One Degree Design is a Ruby on Rails app that gives web developers
-      a checklist of simple ways to reduce their webpage’s carbon footprint.
+      One Degree Design is a Ruby on Rails app that gives web developers and designers
+      a checklist of simple ways to reduce their site’s carbon footprint.
       We’ve researched the most impactful ways of reducing a website’s carbon footprint,
       and present this information in an easy-to-digest, actionable format.</p>
       <h1> How it<span class="highlight"> works</span></h1>