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docs/docs/about/about.md

@@ -91,6 +91,10 @@ We use GitHub to build in public and welcome anyone to join in.
 - [Jan's Roadmap](https://github.com/orgs/janhq/projects/5/views/29)
 - [Jan's Newsletter](https://newsletter.jan.ai)
 
+### Remote Team
+
+Jan has a fully-remote team. We are mainly based in the APAC timezone. We use [Discord](https://discord.gg/af6SaTdzpx) and [Github](https://github.com/janhq) to work.
+
 ### Bootstrapped
 
 Jan is currently a bootstrapped, founder funded startup.
@@ -99,33 +103,29 @@ We balance technical invention with the search for a sustainable business model.
 
 **We invite you to join us on our journey to find PMF**. Join our [Discord here](https://discord.gg/BnHRr3Q7Ms)
 
-### Revenue Philosophy
+### Revenue
 
-❌ Features centering on user compute & data should remain free
+❌ Features centering on user compute & data should remain free. See [analytics](#analytics-philosophy).
 
 ✅ Features incurring opex on Jan could be monetized, e.g. custom solutions, hosted APIs
 
 Join our strategic discussions [here](https://github.com/janhq/jan/discussions).
 
-### Remote Team
-
-Jan has a fully-remote team. We are mainly based in the APAC timezone. We use [Discord](https://discord.gg/af6SaTdzpx) and [Github](https://github.com/janhq) to work.
-
-### Data & Privacy
+### Analytics
 
-Adhering to Jan's privacy preserving philosophy, our analytics philosophy is to get `barely-enough-to-function`.
+Adhering to Jan's privacy preserving philosophy, our analytics philosophy is to get `minimally-enough-to-function`.
 
-**What is tracked**
+#### What is tracked
 
-1. Github tracks downloads and device metadata for all public Github repos. This helps us troubleshoot & ensure cross platform support.
+1. By default, Github tracks downloads and device metadata for all public Github repos. This helps us troubleshoot & ensure cross platform support.
 1. We use Posthog to track a single `app.opened` event without additional user metadata, in order to understand retention.
 1. Additionally, we plan to enable a `Settings` feature for users to turn off all tracking.
 
-**Request for help**
+#### Request for help
 
 As a result, our feature prioritization can feel a bit black box at times.
 
-We'd appreciate high quality user insights and user interviews through [Discord](https://discord.gg/af6SaTdzpx) and [Github](https://github.com/janhq).
+We'd appreciate high quality insights and volunteers for user interviews through [Discord](https://discord.gg/af6SaTdzpx) and [Github](https://github.com/janhq).
 
 ## Contact