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diff --git a/v21.2/create-changefeed.md b/v21.2/create-changefeed.md
@@ -300,7 +300,7 @@ For more information on how to create a changefeed connected to a cloud storage
 > SHOW CHANGEFEED JOBS;
 ~~~
 
-Use the following SQL statements to pause, resume, and cancel a changefeed.
+Use the following SQL statements to pause, resume, or cancel a changefeed.
 
 #### Pause a changefeed
 

diff --git a/v21.2/show-jobs.md b/v21.2/show-jobs.md
@@ -67,7 +67,7 @@ Field | Description
 `error` | If the job `failed`, the error generated by the failure.
 `coordinator_id` | The ID of the node running the job.
 
-See [`SHOW CHANGEFEED JOBS`](#show-changefeed-jobs) for details of changefeed-specific responses.
+For details of changefeed-specific responses, see [`SHOW CHANGEFEED JOBS`](#show-changefeed-jobs).
 
 ## Examples
 
@@ -132,11 +132,11 @@ You can filter jobs by using `SHOW AUTOMATIC JOBS` as the data source for a [`SE
 
 ### Show changefeed jobs
 
-<span class="version-tag">New in v21.2:</span> You can display specific fields relating to changefeed jobs by running `SHOW CHANGEFEED JOBS`, which include:
+<span class="version-tag">New in v21.2:</span> You can display specific fields relating to changefeed jobs by running `SHOW CHANGEFEED JOBS`. These fields include:
 
 * [`high_water_timestamp`](stream-data-out-of-cockroachdb-using-changefeeds.html#monitor-a-changefeed): Guarantees all changes before or at this time have been emitted.
 * [`sink_uri`](create-changefeed.html#sink-uri): The destination URI of the configured sink for a changefeed.
-* `full_table_names`: Provides the full [name resolution](sql-name-resolution.html) for a table. For example, `defaultdb.public.mytable`, the database (`defaultdb`), schema (`public`), and table name (`mytable`).
+* `full_table_names`: Provides the full [name resolution](sql-name-resolution.html) for a table. For example, `defaultdb.public.mytable` refers to the `defaultdb` database, the `public` schema, and the table `mytable` table.
 
 {% include copy-clipboard.html %}
 ~~~ sql
@@ -151,7 +151,7 @@ job_id               |
 (2 rows)
 ~~~
 
-Changefeed jobs can be [paused](stream-data-out-of-cockroachdb-using-changefeeds.html#pause), [resumed](stream-data-out-of-cockroachdb-using-changefeeds.html#resume), and [canceled](stream-data-out-of-cockroachdb-using-changefeeds.html#cancel).
+Changefeed jobs can be [paused](stream-data-out-of-cockroachdb-using-changefeeds.html#pause), [resumed](stream-data-out-of-cockroachdb-using-changefeeds.html#resume), or [canceled](stream-data-out-of-cockroachdb-using-changefeeds.html#cancel).
 
 ### Filter changefeed jobs
 

diff --git a/v21.2/stream-data-out-of-cockroachdb-using-changefeeds.md b/v21.2/stream-data-out-of-cockroachdb-using-changefeeds.md
@@ -165,7 +165,7 @@ For more information, see [`CHANGEFEED FOR`](changefeed-for.html).
 
 ## Configure a changefeed (Enterprise)
 
-An enterprise changefeed streams row-level changes in a configurable format to a configurable sink (i.e., [Kafka](create-changefeed.html#kafka) or a [cloud storage sink](create-changefeed.html#cloud-storage-sink)). You can [create](#create), [pause](#pause), [resume](#resume), [cancel](#cancel), [monitor](#monitor-a-changefeed), and [debug](#debug-a-changefeed) an enterprise changefeed.
+An enterprise changefeed streams row-level changes in a configurable format to a configurable sink (i.e., [Kafka](create-changefeed.html#kafka) or a [cloud storage sink](create-changefeed.html#cloud-storage-sink)). You can [create](#create), [pause](#pause), [resume](#resume), [cancel](#cancel), [monitor](#monitor-a-changefeed), or [debug](#debug-a-changefeed) an enterprise changefeed.
 
 ### Create