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diff --git a/...filtering/src/main/resources/lessonPlans/en/ClientSideFiltering_assignment.adoc b/...filtering/src/main/resources/lessonPlans/en/ClientSideFiltering_assignment.adoc
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 You are logged in as Moe Stooge, CSO of Goat Hills Financial. You have access to everyone in the company's information,
 except the CEO, Neville Bartholomew.  Or at least you should not have access to the CEO's information. For this assignment,
-examine the contents of the page to see what extra information you can find.
+examine the page's contents to see what extra information you can find.
diff --git a/...-side-filtering/src/main/resources/lessonPlans/en/ClientSideFiltering_plan.adoc b/...-side-filtering/src/main/resources/lessonPlans/en/ClientSideFiltering_plan.adoc
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 == Client side filtering
 
-It is always a good practice to send to the client only information which they are supposed
+It is always a good practice to send only information to the client they are supposed
 to have access to.  In this lesson, too much information is being sent to the client, creating
-a serious access control problem. For this exercise, your mission is exploit the extraneous information being returned
-by the server to discover information to which you should not have access.
+a serious access control problem. For this exercise, your mission is to exploit the extraneous information returned
+by the server to discover information to which you should not have access.