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packages/client/src/pages/About/About.tsx

@@ -17,11 +17,9 @@ const About: React.FC = () => {
             <p className='text-base font-extrabold uppercase text-slate-600/50'>what is crisp?</p>
             <div className='space-y-2'>
               <p className='leading-8 text-slate-600'>
-                CRISP (Collusion-Resistant Impartial Selection Protocol) is a groundbreaking component of the Enclave protocol, focused on
-                revolutionizing privacy and security in digital decision-making. It leverages advanced technologies like Fully Homomorphic
-                Encryption (FHE), threshold cryptography, and zero-knowledge proofs (ZKPs) to enable secure, anonymous voting. This protocol
-                ensures that the integrity of each vote is maintained without compromising the voter's privacy, making it a powerful tool
-                for governance and decision-making applications.
+                CRISP (Collusion-Resistant Impartial Selection Protocol) is secure protocol for digital decision making, leveraging
+                Fully Homomorphic Encryption (FHE) and threshold cryptography to enable verifiable secret ballots; a critical
+                component for democracies and many other decision-making applications.
               </p>
               {/* <div className='flex cursor-pointer items-center space-x-2'>
                 <p className='text-lime-400 underline'>See what&apos;s happening under the hood</p>
@@ -32,11 +30,22 @@ const About: React.FC = () => {
           <div className='space-y-4'>
             <p className='text-base font-extrabold uppercase text-slate-600/50'>why is this important?</p>
             <p className='leading-8 text-slate-600'>
-              In a digital age marked by increasing concerns over privacy, security, and the integrity of information, CRISP emerges as a
-              crucial innovation. By protecting against collusion, mitigating vulnerabilities in governance, and preserving the
-              confidentiality of data, CRISP fosters a secure and impartial environment for decision-making. It empowers users and
-              organizations to participate in governance and other sensitive processes with assurance, promoting fairness, transparency, and
-              trust in digital systems.
+              Open ballots are well known to produce sub-optimal outcomes due to bribery and other forms of collusion.
+              CRISP mitigates collusion by ensuring ballots are secret and receipt-free, enabling a secure and impartial
+              decision-making environemnt.
+            </p>
+            {/* <div className='flex cursor-pointer items-center space-x-2'>
+              <p className='text-lime-400 underline'>See what&apos;s happening under the hood</p>
+              <img src={CircleIcon} className='h-[18] w-[18] ' />
+            </div> */}
+          </div>
+          <div className='space-y-4'>
+            <p className='text-base font-extrabold uppercase text-slate-600/50'>Proof of Concept</p>
+            <p className='leading-8 text-slate-600'>
+              This application is a Proof of Concept (PoC), demonstrating the viability of Enclave as a network and CRISP
+              as an application for secret ballots. For the sake getting a demonstration of CRISP into the wild, this PoC
+              application is not yet leveraging Enclave and ommits several key components of CRISP. Future iterations of
+              this and other applications will be progressively more complete.
             </p>
             {/* <div className='flex cursor-pointer items-center space-x-2'>
               <p className='text-lime-400 underline'>See what&apos;s happening under the hood</p>

packages/client/src/pages/PollResult/PollResult.tsx

@@ -53,7 +53,7 @@ const PollResult: React.FC = () => {
             <div className='flex flex-col items-center justify-center space-y-6'>
               <div className='space-y-2 text-center'>
                 <p className='text-sm font-extrabold uppercase'>daily poll</p>
-                <h1 className='text-h1 font-bold text-slate-600'>Results for most recent poll</h1>
+                <h1 className='text-h1 font-bold text-slate-600'>Results</h1>
                 <p className=' text-2xl font-bold'>{formatDate(poll.date)}</p>
               </div>