Changes per stevepiercy review, thanks!

jashion · Oct 21, 2017 · 30bf730 · 30bf730
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diff --git a/docs/quick_tutorial/authentication.rst b/docs/quick_tutorial/authentication.rst
@@ -39,7 +39,7 @@ Steps
 
    .. literalinclude:: authentication/setup.py
     :language: python
-    :emphasize-lines: 6-7
+    :emphasize-lines: 7
     :linenos:
 
 #. We can now install our project in development mode:

diff --git a/docs/quick_tutorial/forms.rst b/docs/quick_tutorial/forms.rst
@@ -41,7 +41,7 @@ Steps
    pulls in Colander as a dependency:
 
    .. literalinclude:: forms/setup.py
-    :emphasize-lines: 6-7
+    :emphasize-lines: 7
     :linenos:
 
 #. We can now install our project in development mode:

diff --git a/docs/quick_tutorial/ini.rst b/docs/quick_tutorial/ini.rst
@@ -102,8 +102,9 @@ The ``.ini`` file is also used for two other functions:
 - *Configuring the WSGI server*. ``[server:main]`` wires up the choice
   of which WSGI *server* for your WSGI *application*. In this case, we
   are using ``waitress`` which was specified in
-  ``tutorial/setup.py``. It also wires up the *port number*: ``listen
-  = localhost:6543`` tells ``waitress`` to listen on port 6543.
+  ``tutorial/setup.py``. It also wires up the *port number*:
+  ``listen = localhost:6543`` tells ``waitress`` to listen on host
+  ``localhost`` at port ``6543``.
 
 - *Configuring Python logging*. Pyramid uses Python standard logging, which
   needs a number of configuration values. The ``.ini`` serves this function.

diff --git a/docs/quick_tutorial/requirements.rst b/docs/quick_tutorial/requirements.rst
@@ -189,7 +189,7 @@ Install Pyramid
 ---------------
 
 We have our Python standard prerequisites out of the way. The Pyramid
-part is pretty easy.
+part is pretty easy. We'll also install a WSGI server, Waitress.
 
 .. parsed-literal::
 
@@ -200,7 +200,7 @@ part is pretty easy.
     c:\\> %VENV%\\Scripts\\pip install "pyramid==\ |release|\ " waitress
 
 Our Python virtual environment now has the Pyramid software available
-as well as the ``waitress`` server.
+as well as the ``waitress`` package.
 
 You can optionally install some of the extra Python packages used in this
 tutorial.