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996.ICU
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* [Chinese version](./README.md)

The name `996.ICU` refers to **"Work by '996', sick in ICU"**, an ironic saying among Chinese programmers, which means that by following the "996" work schedule, you are risking yourself getting into the ICU (Intensive Care Unit).

[![LICENSE](https://img.shields.io/badge/license-Anti%20996-blue.svg)](https://github.com/996icu/996.ICU/blob/master/LICENSE)
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* This is not a political movement. We firmly uphold the labor law and require employers to respect the legitimate rights and interests of their employees.

* It is a great progress from closed source to open source, and it will also be a great progress from open source to emphasize labor rights at the same time. What we want is to create an open source software license that advocates for workers' rights.
* It is a great progress from closed source to open source, and it will also be a great progress from open source to emphasizing labor rights at the same time. What we want is to create an open source software license that advocates for workers' rights.

* We are willing to hear all positive and constructive proposals and advocate for mature and responsible speech.

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- [996.TSC](https://github.com/lxlxw/996.TSC) is a repo designed to let more people know and join the activity of 996.ICU.

- [996.LIST](https://github.com/fengT-T/996_list) is a repo of a rank list of 996 companies and 955 companies.



Where are the issues?
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- This version of Anti-996 License is drafted by [Katt Gu, J.D, University of Illinois, College of Law](https://scholar.google.com.sg/citations?user=PTcpQwcAAAAJ&hl=en&oi=ao); advised by [Suji Yan](https://www.linkedin.com/in/tedkoyan/), CEO of [Dimension](https://www.dimension.im).
- This draft is adapted from the MIT license. For more detailed explanation, please see [Wiki](https://github.com/kattgu7/996-License-Draft/wiki). This license is designed to be compatible with all major open source licenses.
- For law professionals or anyone who is willing to contribute to further version directly, please go to [Anti-996-License-1.0](https://github.com/kattgu7/996-License-Draft). Thank you.

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## Why this Proposal?

I write this template for the whole community. <br/>
Hope we can record useful and valuable suggestions and make they true.
Hope we can record useful and valuable suggestions and make them true.

## Community Value

Provide a template for new proposals. <br/>
A proposal can be used to record suggestions and aggrements. <br/>
It's better for community members to understand and review what import decisions has been made and discussed.
A proposal can be used to record suggestions and agreements. <br/>
It's better for community members to understand and review what import decisions have been made and discussed.

## Problems

In this part, the proposer should describle what problems we are facing. <br/>
In this part, the proposer should describe what problems we are facing. <br/>
For example, currently, we don't have a way to record import decisions and suggestions. <br/>
Pull Requests area is too general and not a good way to express ideas. <br/>
We need a much more formal channel.

## Solutions

In this part, the proposer should statement the solutions or proposals to solve this problems listed in ***Problems*** part. <br/>
In this part, the proposer should statement the solutions or proposals to solve these problems listed in ***Problems*** part. <br/>
For example, we add the proposal directory in the repo and init this proposal template to help the community to build a much more formal channel for suggestion and discussion.

## Resource & Requirements
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## Actions & implementation Plan

In this part, the proposer should describle the actions and implementation plan after the proposal is approved by the community.
In this part, the proposer should describe the actions and implementation plan after the proposal is approved by the community.

## References

In the part, list out links to the reference resource.
For example, for this proposal the main reference is <br/>
For example, for this proposal, the main reference is <br/>
- [PEP 1 -- PEP Purpose and Guidelines](https://www.python.org/dev/peps/pep-0001/)

## Copyright
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