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Co-authored-by: Esha Noronha <[email protected]>

14/umbraco-cms/tutorials/starter-kit/lessons/2-add-a-blog-post-publication-date/part-3.md

@@ -11,7 +11,7 @@ Finally, in Part Three we shall change the blog listing.
     * Select *Default.cshtml*.
 
 2. Scroll down to find the `foreach` loop.
-3. Declare a new `publicationDate` variable as the first thing with the loop:
+3. Declare a new `publicationDate` variable as the first thing within the loop:
 
     ```csharp
     var publicationDate = post.Value<DateTime>("publicationDate");
@@ -23,7 +23,7 @@ Finally, in Part Three we shall change the blog listing.
     <small class="blogpost-date">@publicationDate.ToLongDateString()</small>
     ```
 
-    * The `ToLongDateString()` method ensures a clean looking date format.
+    * The ToLongDateString() method is called on the `publicationDate` variable to format it as a long date string.
 
 5. Redefine the `blogposts` variable before the first `div` tag - this will be used for sorting the posts:
 
@@ -34,13 +34,17 @@ Finally, in Part Three we shall change the blog listing.
     ```
 
     * Because we are sorting by a custom property we need to use the generic `Value` method.
+
+{% hint style="info" %}
+You can use **Query builder** to construct your queries in a more structured and reusable manner. Use the `UmbracoHelper` or the `IPublishedContentQuery` interface to build queries dynamically. For more information, see the [Querying & Models](https://docs.umbraco.com/umbraco-cms/reference/querying) article.
+{% endhint %}
 6. Locate the `@foreach` loop, and change `Model.Blostposts` to the variable created above: `blogposts`:
 
     ```csharp
     @foreach (IPublishedContent post in blogposts)
     ```
 
-7. *Save* the partial view - a confirmation message should appear confirming that the Partial view has been saved.
+7. **Save** the partial view - a confirmation message should appear confirming that the Partial view has been saved.
 8. Now view both the Blog overview and the blog posts themselves in the browser to confirm that all is working as expected.
 
 ## Summary

14/umbraco-cms/tutorials/starter-kit/lessons/3-add-open-graph/step-4.md

@@ -4,9 +4,10 @@ The final piece to the puzzle is adding the partial view that will be rendered w
 
 1. Go to the **Settings** section.
 
-2. Click on **Partial Views** and select **Create...** > **New empty partial view**
+2. Click on **Partial Views** and select **Create...** > **New empty partial view**.
+3. **Enter a Name** for the partial view. Let's call it: _OpenGraph_
 3. Add the standard view model: `@inherits Umbraco.Cms.Web.Common.Views.UmbracoViewPage`
-    * We are using compositions and only render this view on pages where the composition exists, which means we need to be a little more specific.
+    * We only render this view on pages where the composition exists, so we need to be more specific.
 4. In the template editor, pass in the specific model you've created by adding `<IOpenGraph>` after the view model.
     * Now you can start rendering the meta tags and adding in the values.
 5. First add the title property