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Patch104pZH/Design/Changes/v1.0/1096_scud_storm_worker_spawn_delay.yaml

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 date: 2022-09-04
 
-title: Increases the GLA Scud Storm Hole Worker spawn interval from 20 to 30 seconds
+title: Increases Hole Repair Worker spawn interval of GLA Scud Storm from 20 to 30 seconds
 
 changes:
-  - tweak: The GLA Scud Storm hole worker now spawns in 30 seconds instead of 20 seconds intervals. This will prevent the first worker from dying in the poison puddle. No EVA event is triggered for damaging the spawned worker. Effectively a Scud Storm can now rebuild 10 seconds quicker than originally. The Toxin Field time has been adjusted to accommodate the Worker spawn time properly.
+  - tweak: The Hole Repair Worker of the GLA Scud Storm now spawns in 30 instead of 20 seconds intervals. This will prevent the first Worker from dying in the poison puddle. No EVA event is triggered for damaging the spawned Worker. Effectively a Scud Storm can now rebuild 10 seconds quicker than originally. The Toxin Field time has been adjusted to properly accommodate the Worker spawn time.
 
 labels:
   - buff

Patch104pZH/Design/Changes/v1.0/1137_bomb_truck_damages.yaml

@@ -4,8 +4,8 @@ date: 2022-09-06
 title: Increases damage range bonus of GLA Bomb Truck upgrades
 
 changes:
-  - tweak: Increases damage range bonus of GLA Bomb Truck Bio Bomb by +28%.
-  - tweak: Increases damage range bonus of GLA Bomb Truck Bio Bomb + High Explosive by +16%.
+  - tweak: The damage range bonus of the GLA Bomb Truck Bio Bomb is increased by 28%.
+  - tweak: The damage range bonus of the GLA Bomb Truck Bio Bomb + High Explosive is increased by 16%.
 
 labels:
   - buff

Patch104pZH/Design/Changes/v1.0/1137_bomb_truck_upgrade_cost.yaml

@@ -4,7 +4,7 @@ date: 2022-09-06
 title: Decreases upgrade cost of GLA Bomb Truck Bio Bomb from 500 to 200
 
 changes:
-  - tweak: Decreases the upgrade cost of GLA Bomb Truck Bio Bomb from 500 to 200.
+  - tweak: The upgrade cost of the GLA Bomb Truck Bio Bomb is decreased from 500 to 200.
 
 labels:
   - buff

Patch104pZH/Design/Changes/v1.0/1138_bomb_truck_locomotor.yaml

@@ -4,7 +4,7 @@ date: 2022-09-06
 title: Improves locomotor of GLA Bomb Truck
 
 changes:
-  - tweak: Improves the locomotor of GLA Bomb Truck. In undamaged state, no tangible difference in driving performance is to be expected. In damaged state, the driving performance is now marginally better. Visually the driving now looks and feels smoother.
+  - tweak: The locomotor of the GLA Bomb Truck is improved. In undamaged state, no tangible difference in driving performance is expected. In damaged state, the driving performance is now marginally better. Visually the driving now looks and feels smoother.
 
 labels:
   - buff

Patch104pZH/Design/Changes/v1.0/1141_battle_drone_shroud_range.yaml

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 date: 2022-09-06
 
-title: Increases shroud clearing range of USA Battle Drone from 150 to 300
+title: Increases sight range of USA Battle Drone from 150 to 300
 
 changes:
-  - tweak: Increases the shroud clearing range of USA Battle Drone from 150 to 300.
+  - tweak: The shroud clearing range of USA Battle Drone is increased by 100%, from 150 to 300.
 
 labels:
   - controversial

Patch104pZH/Design/Changes/v1.0/1141_hellfire_drone_shroud_range.yaml

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 date: 2022-09-06
 
-title: Decreases shroud clearing range of USA Hellfire Drone from 500 to 400
+title: Decreases sight range of USA Hellfire Drone from 500 to 400
 
 changes:
-  - tweak: Decreases the shroud clearing range of USA Hellfire Drone from 500 to 400.
+  - tweak: The shroud clearing range of USA Hellfire Drone is decreased by 20%, from 500 to 400.
 
 labels:
   - controversial

Patch104pZH/Design/Changes/v1.0/1153_combat_bike_required_xp.yaml

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 date: 2022-09-07
 
-title: Decreases required level up experience of GLA Combat Bike from 200 400 800 to 100 200 400
+title: Decreases required level up experience of GLA Combat Bike by 50%
 
 changes:
-  - tweak: Decreases required level up experience of GLA Combat Bike from 200 400 800 to 100 200 400. This matches the required experience of GLA Jarmen Kell.
+  - tweak: The required level up experience of GLA Combat Bike is decreased from 200 400 800 to 100 200 400. This matches the required experience of GLA Jarmen Kell.
 
 labels:
   - buff

Patch104pZH/Design/Changes/v1.0/1155_burton_sight_range.yaml

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 date: 2022-09-07
 
-title: Decreases USA Colonel Burton sight from 500 to 400
+title: Decreases sight range of USA Colonel Burton from 500 to 400
 
 changes:
-  - tweak: Decreases the USA Colonel Burton shroud range from 500 to 400. This matches the shroud range of the other Hero units. With the SEARCH AND DESTROY Battle Plan, Colonel Burton will have a shroud range of 480 instead of 600.
+  - tweak: The shroud clearing range of USA Colonel Burton is decreased by 20%, from 500 to 400. This matches the shroud clearing range of the other Hero units. With the SEARCH AND DESTROY Battle Plan, Colonel Burton will now have a shroud clearing range of 480 instead of originally 600.
 
 labels:
   - controversial

Patch104pZH/Design/Changes/v1.0/1162_sentry_drone_build_cost.yaml

@@ -4,10 +4,10 @@ date: 2022-09-08
 title: Decreases cost of USA Sentry Drone to match cost of Humvee
 
 changes:
-  - tweak: Decreases cost of regular USA Sentry Drone from 800 to 700.
-  - tweak: Decreases cost of USA Laser Sentry Drone from 800 to 700.
-  - tweak: Decreases cost of USA Airforce Sentry Drone from 850 to 800.
-  - tweak: Decreases cost of USA Superweapon Sentry Drone from 1000 to 850.
+  - tweak: The cost of the regular USA Sentry Drone is decreased from 800 to 700.
+  - tweak: The cost of the USA Laser Sentry Drone is decreased from 800 to 700.
+  - tweak: The cost of the USA Airforce Sentry Drone is decreased from 850 to 800.
+  - tweak: The cost of the USA Superweapon Sentry Drone is decreased from 1000 to 850.
 
 labels:
   - buff

Patch104pZH/Design/Changes/v1.0/1162_sentry_drone_damage.yaml

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 date: 2022-09-08
 
-title: Increases USA Sentry Drone gun damage by 20%
+title: Increases gun damage of USA Sentry Drone by 20%
 
 changes:
-  - tweak: Increases USA Sentry Drone gun damage by 20%, from 40 to 50. This makes the Machine Gun damage output identical with the Vet 0 Humvee.
+  - tweak: The gun damage of the USA Sentry Drone is increased by 20%, from 40 to 50. This makes the Machine Gun damage output identical with the Vet 0 Humvee.
 
 labels:
   - buff

Patch104pZH/Design/Changes/v1.0/1162_sentry_drone_deployment.yaml

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 title: Removes gun deployment mechanic from USA Sentry Drone
 
 changes:
-  - tweak: Removes the gun deployment mechanic from USA Sentry Drone. It no longer requires 1 second to acquire a fresh target, and 2 seconds to engage a consecutive target if it needs to move to a new position. This is a time and performance boost. It will also make the unit feel more responsive in combat situations.
+  - tweak: The gun deployment mechanic of the USA Sentry Drone is now removed. It no longer requires 1 second to acquire a fresh target, and 2 seconds to engage a consecutive target if it needs to move to a new position. This is a time and performance boost. It will also make the unit feel more responsive in combat situations.
 
 labels:
   - buff

Patch104pZH/Design/Changes/v1.0/1162_sentry_drone_movement.yaml

@@ -4,7 +4,7 @@ date: 2022-09-08
 title: Decreases acceleration time of USA Sentry Drone by 70%
 
 changes:
-  - tweak: Decreases the acceleration time of USA Sentry Drone by 70%, from 1000 to 300 ms.
+  - tweak: The acceleration time of the USA Sentry Drone is decreased by 70%, from 1000 to 300 ms.
 
 labels:
   - buff

Patch104pZH/Design/Changes/v1.0/1162_sentry_drone_sight_range.yaml

@@ -4,7 +4,7 @@ date: 2022-09-08
 title: Increases sight range of USA Sentry Drone by 30%
 
 changes:
-  - tweak: Increases the sight range of USA Sentry Drone by 30%, from 350 to 400.
+  - tweak: The shroud clearing range of the USA Sentry Drone is increased by 30%, from 350 to 400.
 
 labels:
   - buff

Patch104pZH/Design/Changes/v1.0/1162_sentry_drone_tracks.yaml

@@ -4,7 +4,7 @@ date: 2022-09-08
 title: Replaces terrain tracks of USA Sentry Drone with less transparent ones
 
 changes:
-  - tweak: Replaces terrain tracks of USA Sentry Drone with less transparent ones. This makes the tracks less visible than those of tanks and China Outpost.
+  - tweak: The terrain tracks of the USA Sentry Drone now show with less transparency. This makes the tracks less visible than those of tanks and China Outpost.
 
 labels:
   - buff

Patch104pZH/Design/Changes/v1.0/1162_sentry_drone_upgrade.yaml

@@ -4,8 +4,8 @@ date: 2022-09-08
 title: Decreases USA Sentry Drone gun upgrade time by 66%, cost by 20%
 
 changes:
-  - tweak: Decreases USA Sentry Drone gun upgrade time by 66%, from 30 to 10 seconds.
-  - tweak: Decreases USA Sentry Drone gun upgrade cost by 20%, from 1000 to 800.
+  - tweak: The USA Sentry Drone's gun upgrade time is decreased by 66%, from 30 to 10 seconds.
+  - tweak: The USA Sentry Drone's gun upgrade cost is decreased by 20%, from 1000 to 800.
 
 labels:
   - buff

Patch104pZH/Design/Changes/v1.0/1178_patriot_battery_auto_reload.yaml

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 date: 2022-09-10
 
-title: Adds idle auto reload after 2100 ms for USA Patriot Battery
+title: Adds idle auto reload after 2100 ms to USA Patriot Battery
 
 changes:
-  - fix: All weapons of the USA Patriot Battery will now reload the entire clip after being idle for around 2 seconds.
+  - tweak: All weapons of the USA Patriot Battery will now reload when idle. This makes the base defense a bit better in scenarios where it managed to only fire a few of its rockets on its target and at least 2 seconds pass until the next attack.
 
 labels:
   - buff

Patch104pZH/Design/Changes/v1.0/1199_gattling_spin_timeout.yaml

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 date: 2022-09-14
 
-title: Increases China Gattling Tank spin timeout from 1000 to 2000 ms
+title: Increases China Gattling Tank spin timeout against ground units from 1000 to 2000 ms
 
 changes:
-  - tweak: Increases GattlingTankGun ContinuousFireCoast from 1000 to 2000 ms. This matches the setup from Generals (CCG) and also the setting from the Zero Hour (ZH) GattlingTankGunAir. With this change the Gattling Tank gun can be microed more generously to squeeze out the most damage potential.
+  - tweak: The China Gattling Tank spin timeout against ground units is increased by 100%, from 1000 to 2000 ms. The spin timeout against air units is unchanged. This matches the spin timeout setup from Generals (CCG). With this change the Gattling Tank gun can be microed more generously against ground units to squeeze out the most damage potential.
 
 labels:
   - buff

Patch104pZH/Design/Changes/v1.0/1220_pilot_humvee_passenger.yaml

@@ -4,7 +4,7 @@ date: 2022-09-18
 title: Fixes USA Pilot not promoting the Humvee, but taking passenger seat instead
 
 changes:
-  - tweak: Forbids NO_GARRISON flag objects from entering Humvee. NO_GARRISON is unique to Pilot and makes it unable to enter civilian buildings, Tunnels and Bunkers. Cursor still appears and it promotes the Humvee when entered. Therefore a Vet 3 Humvee can no longer transport Pilots.
+  - tweak: The USA Pilot is no longer able to accidentally take a passenger seat in a Humvee. Instead it now consistently promotes the Humvee when entered. A Vet 3 Humvee can no longer transport Pilots, but the Ambulance still can.
 
 labels:
   - bug

Patch104pZH/Design/Changes/v1.0/1377_beacon_limit.yaml

@@ -4,7 +4,7 @@ date: 2022-10-16
 title: Increases Player Beacon limit from 3 to 5
 
 changes:
-  - fix: Increases Player Beacon limit from 3 to 5.
+  - tweak: The Player Beacon limit is increased from 3 to 5.
 
 labels:
   - controversial

Patch104pZH/Design/Changes/v1.0/1449_dragon_poison_armor.yaml

@@ -4,7 +4,7 @@ date: 2022-11-06
 title: Increases poison damage resistance of China Dragon Tank by 20%
 
 changes:
-  - fix: Originally Dragon Tanks take 25% damage from POISON. Reducing this to 20% is a subtle and effective way to take some of the edge off of Toxin Tunnel Networks for all China factions.
+  - tweak: The poison damage armor of the China Dragon Tank is increased by 20%. Originally Dragon Tanks take 25% damage from POISON. Reducing this to 20% is a subtle and effective way to take some of the edge off of Toxin Tunnel Networks for all China factions.
 
 labels:
   - buff

Patch104pZH/Design/Changes/v1.0/1457_strategy_center_detection_range.yaml

@@ -4,7 +4,7 @@ date: 2022-11-08
 title: Decreases SEARCH AND DESTROY stealth detection range of USA Strategy Center from 500 to 300
 
 changes:
-  - tweak: Decreases SEARCH AND DESTROY stealth detection range of USA Strategy Center from 500 to 300. As all heroes (now) have a sight range of 400, options for reacting to a Strategy Center's presence before being detected are incredibly limited. Not only this, but the structure's extensive stealth detection range over the owner's entire base effectively renders heroes useless - on top of the substantial range bonus that Search and Destroy provides. Reducing the stealth detection range is a reasonable way to counterbalance the incredible effectiveness of S&D without directly affecting the bonus itself.
+  - tweak: The SEARCH AND DESTROY stealth detection range of the USA Strategy Center is decreased by 40%, from 500 to 300. As all heroes (now) have a sight range of 400, options for reacting to a Strategy Center's presence before being detected are incredibly limited. Not only this, but the structure's extensive stealth detection range over the owner's entire base effectively renders heroes useless - on top of the substantial range bonus that SEARCH AND DESTROY provides. Reducing the stealth detection range is a reasonable way to counterbalance the incredible effectiveness of SEARCH AND DESTROY without directly affecting the bonus itself.
 
 labels:
   - controversial

Patch104pZH/Design/Changes/v1.0/1457_strategy_center_snd_vision_range.yaml

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 date: 2022-11-08
 
-title: Decreases SEARCH AND DESTROY vision range bonus for USA Strategy Center from 800 to 600
+title: Decreases SEARCH AND DESTROY sight range bonus for USA Strategy Center from 800 to 600
 
 changes:
-  - tweak: Decreases the SEARCH AND DESTROY vision range bonus for USA Strategy Center from 800 to 600. Accordingly, the Strategy Center no longer has an extreme shroud-clearing range of 800 under the effects of Search and Destroy. It was an unnecessary advantage for USA that discounts map awareness. The range has been reduced to a more palatable range of 600 - a 1.5x increase of the default vision range of 400. This was preferred over reducing the default vision of 400 to 300 due to the Bombardment cannon's weapon range of 400.
+  - tweak: The SEARCH AND DESTROY shroud clearing range bonus of the USA Strategy Center is decreased by 25%, from 800 to 600. Accordingly, the Strategy Center no longer has this large shroud clearing range of 800 under the effects of Search and Destroy. It was an unnecessary advantage for USA that discounts map awareness. The range has been reduced to a more palatable range of 600 - a 1.5x increase of the default sight range of 400. This was preferred over reducing the default vision of 400 to 300 due to the Bombardment cannon's weapon range of 400.
 
 labels:
   - controversial

Patch104pZH/Design/Changes/v1.0/1469_battle_drone_upgrade_armor_bonus.yaml

@@ -4,7 +4,7 @@ date: 2022-11-16
 title: Decreases Drone Armor Upgrade bonus of USA Battle Drone from 50% to 25%
 
 changes:
-  - fix: Decreases the Drone Armor Upgrade bonus of the USA Battle Drone from 50% to 25%. This makes the armor bonus consistent with the other vehicle drones.
+  - tweak: The Drone Armor Upgrade bonus of the USA Battle Drone is decreased from 50% to 25%. This makes the armor bonus consistent with the other vehicle drones.
 
 labels:
   - bug

Patch104pZH/Design/Changes/v1.0/1490_nuke_silo_death_damage_radius.yaml

@@ -4,10 +4,10 @@ date: 2022-11-30
 title: Increases death explosion damage and radius of China Nuke Silo
 
 changes:
-  - tweak: Increases primary death explosion damage of China Nuke Silo from 400 to 600.
-  - tweak: Increases secondary death explosion damage of China Nuke Silo from 100 to 150.
-  - tweak: Increases primary death explosion radius of China Nuke Silo from 50 to 75.
-  - tweak: Increases secondary death explosion radius of China Nuke Silo from 100 to 125.
+  - tweak: The primary death explosion damage of the China Nuke Silo is increased from 400 to 600.
+  - tweak: The primary death explosion radius of the China Nuke Silo is increased from 50 to 75.
+  - tweak: The secondary death explosion damage of the China Nuke Silo is increased from 100 to 150.
+  - tweak: The secondary death explosion radius of the China Nuke Silo is increased from 100 to 125.
 
 labels:
   - buff

Patch104pZH/Design/Changes/v1.0/1523_china_mines_build_cost.yaml

@@ -4,7 +4,7 @@ date: 2023-01-07
 title: Decreases build cost of China Neutron Mines
 
 changes:
-  - fix: Decreases build cost of rarely used China Neutron Mines from 500 to 400. This cost reduction makes them a bit more attractive for occasional investment.
+  - tweak: The build cost of China Neutron Mines is decreased from 500 to 400. This cost reduction makes them a bit more attractive for occasional investment.
 
 labels:
   - buff

Patch104pZH/Design/Changes/v1.0/1533_china_mines_build_time.yaml

@@ -4,8 +4,8 @@ date: 2023-01-08
 title: Decreases build time of China Mines
 
 changes:
-  - fix: Decreases build time of regular China Mines from 20 to 18.
-  - fix: Decreases build time of China Neutron Mines from 25 to 18.
+  - tweak: The build time of regular China Mines is decreased from 20 to 18.
+  - tweak: The build time of China Neutron Mines is decreased from 25 to 18.
 
 labels:
   - buff

Patch104pZH/Design/Changes/v1.0/1540_helix_nuke_bomb_damage.yaml

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 date: 2023-01-10
 
-title: Increases main damage of China Helix Nuke Bomb by 33%
+title: Increases overall damage of China Helix Nuke Bomb by 33%
 
 changes:
-  - tweak: Increased primary damage of China Helix Nuke Bomb from 300 to 400. This matches the primary damage of the Nuke Cannon shell. The increased primary damage makes it more attractive to use. Since it now applies as much damage as Nuke Cannon does, the damages are easier to anticipate.
-  - tweak: Decreases secondary damage of China Helix Nuke Bomb from 50 to 20. This matches the secondary damage of the Nuke Cannon shell.
+  - tweak: The primary damage of the China Helix Nuke Bomb is increased from 300 to 400. This matches the primary damage of the Nuke Cannon shell. The increased primary damage makes it more attractive to use. Since it now applies as much damage as the Nuke Cannon does, the damages are easier to anticipate.
+  - tweak: The secondary damage of the China Helix Nuke Bomb is decreased from 50 to 20. This matches the secondary damage of the Nuke Cannon shell.
 
 labels:
   - buff

Patch104pZH/Design/Changes/v1.0/1554_hold_line_plan_armor_bonus.yaml

@@ -4,7 +4,7 @@ date: 2023-01-15
 title: Increases USA unit armor bonus for HOLD THE LINE Battle Plan from 11.1% to 20.0%
 
 changes:
-  - fix: Increases the USA unit armor bonus of HOLD THE LINE Battle Plan from 11.1% to 20.0%. Armor bonus is synonymous for damage resistance. This makes the use of the HOLD THE LINE Battle Plan more attractive for all USA factions. Traditionally USA favors the SEARCH AND DESTROY Battle Plan above the others by a large margin.
+  - tweak: The USA unit armor bonus from the HOLD THE LINE Battle Plan is increased from 11.1% to 20.0%. Armor bonus is synonymous for damage resistance. This makes the use of the HOLD THE LINE Battle Plan more attractive for all USA factions. Traditionally USA favors the SEARCH AND DESTROY Battle Plan above the others by a large margin.
 
 labels:
   - buff

Patch104pZH/Design/Changes/v1.0/1555_king_raptor_point_defense_laser.yaml

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 date: 2023-01-15
 
-title: Removes second Point Defense Laser from USA King Raptor and halves reload time of single Point Defense Laser
+title: Removes second Point Defense Laser from USA King Raptor and halves reload time of remaining single Point Defense Laser
 
 changes:
-  - fix: The USA King Raptor no longer has 2 Point Defense Laser modules with reload times of 266 ms each. Instead it now has just one with a reload time of 133 ms.
+  - tweak: The USA King Raptor no longer has 2 Point Defense Laser modules with reload times of 266 ms each. Instead it now has just one with a reload time of 133 ms.
 
 labels:
   - controversial

Patch104pZH/Design/Changes/v1.0/164_demo_technical_suicide_delay.yaml

@@ -4,7 +4,7 @@ date: 2021-09-03
 title: Fixes delayed suicide of GLA Demo Technical of up to 0.75 seconds
 
 changes:
-  - fix: The turret of the GLA Technical no longer has to realign up to 0.75 seconds to face directly forward before the vehicle explodes when ordered to suicide. It will explode immediately regardless of its previous orientation.
+  - fix: The turret of the GLA Technical no longer has to realign up to 0.75 seconds to face directly forward before the vehicle explodes when ordered to suicide. It will explode immediately regardless of the vehicle's turret orientation.
 
 labels:
   - bug

Patch104pZH/Design/Changes/v1.0/1670_overlord_emperor_idle_reload.yaml

@@ -4,7 +4,7 @@ date: 2023-02-11
 title: Adds idle auto reload after 2100 ms to China Overlord, Emperor
 
 changes:
-  - tweak: The China Overlord will now always reload when idle. This makes the unit a bit better in scenarios where it managed to only fire with one of its barrel on its target and some time passes until the next target is attacked.
+  - tweak: The China Overlord will now always reload when idle. This makes the unit a bit better in scenarios where it managed to only fire with one of its barrels on its target and at least 2 seconds pass until the next attack.
 
 labels:
   - buff