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Re-write the two sentences expressing how including a global variable `name` might cause issues.
Include a sentence which possibly closes the article more clearly.
when highlighting the entire statement the wording is a tad confusing
pending issue: the link toward [Kyle Simpson's opinion](http://blog.getify.com/constantly-confusing-const/) doesn't actually forward a blog post. The closes match I could find with a quick search is [this URL](https://frontendmasters.com/courses/es6-right-parts/let-vs-var/), but it describes a video on the subject, and not a blog post.
try to simplify a few sentences possibly overly-complicated
break complex sentences in simpler lines
Backticks added (hopefully) only when needed
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thank you :) Looks like Kyle Simpson's website is dead :( |
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A bit of a pity. Luckily the article details the main point behind the blog post. And thank you for the opportunity. |
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I've tried to improve the wording of a few sentences which I thought could use a revision.
Let me know if there is some value to the changes I've made, as I plan to go through all markdown files. They are quite inspiring.
One last note: in the file "05 - Is var Dead? What should I use?.md" the link toward Kyle Simpson's opinion doesn't seem to forward toward an actual blog post. I've looked around, but all I could find was a video on frontendmasters, loosely related to the subject.