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@@ -28,42 +28,21 @@ I am a Professional Sr. frontend developer with full stack developer skills and
 
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 With over 20 years in the web technology career path and working with agile, creative, collaborative, 
-flexible development environments, I have gained the knowledge and experience needed to be an excellent 
-web developer in both frontend and backend development environments. </p>
-
-<p>Weather I am standing up new server
- environments within a physical environment or working in virtual environment such as AWS. I am capable 
- of creating micro web services and I have developed  restful APIs needed to transmit site data. I have 
- experience working with SQLand Mysql databases, creating tables, views or procedures in the database. 
- And on the frontend I am capable or slicing up artwork in Photoshop, Illustrator, Figma or AffinityDesigner
- or any other image render platform and writing the markup necessary to create visual web wireframes or 
- templates and to render the creative in all modern browsers but done so with responsiveness, grace and 
- elegance and done so as to make everything easy for the user to navigate. I prefer to manage code in git, 
- gitlab or BitBucket. I am familiar with Node.js projects and my primary stack is LAMP but I am familiar 
- with nginx as well as ms iis. I’ve worked with personal sites, small business sites, corporate and 
- enterprise sites such as Spectrum, Verizon and Time Warner Cable as well as worked with internal projects 
- at Verizon where I constructed entire applications on an intranet. During that time I also created the 
- RedZone Frontend UI, RedZone backend content management system and the RedZone API which served an 
- interactive website for field engineers but was also broadcast to a global audience. The API contained 
- sensitive coordinate-based information available to each field engineer used to hopefully save their life 
- by giving them instructions to get police guidance, where to enter on a building, who to contact and which
-  portions of the city are dangerous. I have also taught high school and college students HTML, CSS, 
-  JavaScript and PHP as well as basic web development, styling with CSS, Using jQuery to shorthand JavaScript
-  and web application development using SPA using Astro.build, Node.js, STRAPI API and Laravel PHP. I also 
-  have experience with OpenGL web and rendering 3D, interactive content to the web using Unity3D or Unreal 
-  Engine 4.</p>
+flexible development environments, I have gained the knowledgeable experience needed to be an excellent 
+web developer in both frontend and backend environments. </p>
+
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 				<h2 class="section-title">Background</h2>
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-						My name is <a href="mailto:[email protected]">Zurik Phillips</a> and I have been working as a Web Developer for 20+ years. 
-						I've had the privilege to work with some of the worlds most recognizable brands such
-						as The HomeDepot, Pier1 Imports, Chick-Fil-A, Orkin, SummersEve, PediaLax.com, TGIFridays,
-						The Salvation Army, GoodyGoody.com, DownTownDallas.com, SUCCESS Magazine, Spectrum.com and  
-						Verizon.com and I have also worked with some truly amazing developers. All who have made me
-						who I am today!
+						My name is <a href="mailto:[email protected]">Zurik Phillips</a> and I have been in this industry for 20+ years.
+						During my career as a web developer, I have wroked with businesses large and small to create web experiences, custom 
+						content management systems, custom REST APIs, custom e-shopping solutions, custom micro-sites and micro web-services. 
+						I have over 8 years in the creative / ad-agency / agile development /  UI Developer space, I have taught classes in
+						web application development the past two years and helped to create real world proof of concept applications that were
+						later used in production.
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